Let me know on a scale of 1-10 how this avatar looks, and give some constructive criticism on how it can be improved.

9

It's beautiful, but not my style. If I were a tad more girly, I would have given it a ten.

not liking the hat. that's my only concern. not really my style either but something different on the head could be changed. it'd be really good then. :)

I think the pink and white gose well together, but since you have a little black in there, it might need another black outliner, like black shoes.

Edit. I forgot to rait. I'd give it an 8.