Zhaoka

For one thing all the images were working fine until I shifted the desc' a bit now they won't load, but I'm not sure if that is me, subeta or generically, so I'd like to know what it's doing for others. There should be a BG, 5 images in his story and his overlay.

If it's all okay, could you proof read his story for me, I'm likely to miss spelling/grammar mistakes having just written it.

Thank you in advance =3 [edit] Okay I just did a hard refresh and all the images are now showing up.