I wrote my first ever pet story for Jankie!

I want to know what you guys think?

It has some swear words. But i have goals for all my pets/stories.

opinions?

please ping :)

edit: Jankie is like a slang term for gross, physically unappealing, etc. Or at least where im from thats what it means/

Wrong board hun :) I think this goes in the writing discussion forum. This board is for pet suggestions for the site, like suggesting new pet colours.

Thanks! I wasn't sure.

Do you move forum posts? If so may you please relocate me? :D