hello, I have a 10 paragraph assignment due on Friday and it would help me SO much if you could give me a couple hints on constructive criticism! please comment!

wont anyone help me? sob, sob T-T p-please.

well post it and let's take it apart

I think that it was due quite a while ago.

Since this thread is no longer useful, as the assignment is past due I'll go ahead and lock this thread. If I am mistaken and you wish to utilize this thread don't hesitate to contact me through sMail or Comments. :)