Beams of soft, smooth moonlight glistened off a small pool of water sat on top of a small sanctuary, soft raindrops fell sweetly into the water making a plink sound when it splashed.. -bob9
Purple prose...only good for romance novels. And for Large Hams.
Xd im sorry :(
Shortest fanfic ever.
Also, creepy signature.
thanks :)
10/10
you, my friend, are a wordsmith the likes of which this internet has never seen
Purple prose and wrong forum.

Well, at least it's better than "My Immortal."
That's not saying much, though...
Try fanartcentral... or even fanfiction.net. Not here. :c
Also, there's a writing discussion forum for this, that you seemed to scroll right past.