Anyone have any critiques?

I like your 4th of july! I'd say maybe lose the vest over the shirt, but that's it :D

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Oooh, I like it! Makes me think of warm summer nights ❤ I don't have any critiques.

I'm moving this to HA Suggestions, because that's where critiques belong (:

Thanks. ^-^ I was unsure where to put it.