I just want general opinions because I feel like it's missing something.

Willing to do the same for others as well. c:

To be honest, I don't think the popstar corset fits in at all. You should get something else with the light yellow color.

And weird, I think that it's missing something too. Maybe a tattoo?

Personally, I think you should have some kind of leg or arm addition. They look rather bare. Stockings or a tattoo would do nicely!