Hi, this is my first time in the CW market and I've got a slouchy jumper design that I really want to try getting on site. However, I'm pretty inexperienced and the whole CWs have been quite confusing to me so I'd appreciate some help and feedback. Right now, I'm most concerned about whether the design I've got in mind might be irksome or frowned upon. I'm aware that there are many slouchy jumpers on site and to be very honest I'm inspired by one of those and want to produce something similar. However please do let me know if it might not be a wise idea and I won't proceed with the overlay as I really don't want to risk getting into trouble or stepping on any toes.

I've posted two examples of what I've got in mind for the design under the spoiler tag. Please excuse the bad quality of shading/ lineart of the first image (the dark grey/ blackish one) 😅 as it's more like a quick sketch I did with my finger on my laptop. It's just a rough idea of what I envision the jumper would look like. I don't have access to my tablet/ mouse at the moment and it's a little difficult shading/ drawing lineart without them. I managed to do a clean lineart version without shading (the magenta one) so if possible I'd love some critique on it please (e.g. thickness of lineart, possible anatomy problems or any other potential issues).

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Thank you very much in advance :)