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Headmasters Halima Moussa, Agilbert Fontaine, and Appoline Persnickety lead the six school champions into the Great Hall of the Ilvermorny castle with the rest of the students and staff filing in behind them. The staff members motioned for the rest of the students to stand against the walls to allow the champions and headmasters room. In the center of the room stood six empty stools, and the front of the room held a long table with cauldrons, water, and potion ingredients.

"The time has finally come, champions! Your first task begins today," Professor Fontaine's booming voice said to the room. Professor Fontaine never liked to stand upon ceremony, so he went straight to the point. "As you can plainly see from the table behind me, your task will be involving your potion making skills. When the task begins, six volunteers will be entering the Great Hall to sit on the stools before you. Each volunteer has been given two different potions that make the volunteer exhibit two different sets of symptoms. You are charged with diagnosing their ailments and brewing two potions to counteract their symptoms. No two volunteers have the same ailments. All of the potion ingredients you will need can be found on the table near the front of the room."

Professor Moussa interjected, "Though please be careful with how much of the ingredients you use, as you will all be working from the same pool of ingredients, and there is a finite supply."

"Yes, some of these ingredients are very rare, and we were only able to acquire a small amount of some of them. Please be mindful," Professor Persnickety added.

"Now none of the ailments the volunteers have taken on are deadly, but there is a time limit imposed on this challenge. You have two hours to identify the afflicting ailments and brew both potions needed to cure them. At the end of the two hours, your potions will be administered to your volunteers. We have medics on hand in case anything goes awry."

"One more thing to remember," Professor Persnickety said, "is that these ailments will not be able to be cured by spells. Only potions will work."

Professor Fontaine waved his wand in a circle in the direction of the stools. Numbers appeared over the stools in red.

"In a few moments, the volunteers will be coming forward and taking their places on their stools. To choose which volunteer you will be diagnosing, you will each come forward and choose a number from a piece of parchment out of this bag." Professor Fontaine produced a small red velvet bag from his pocket. "Your volunteer will be sitting under the corresponding number."

"Good luck to all of you!" Professor Moussa beamed. "We are confident you will be up to the challenge!"

The volunteers emerged from the crowd, each with their symptoms plain to see. One volunteer's nose was as large as the rest of her face, while another couldn't stop sneezing. They took their seats on their designated stools and waited for the task to begin.


This is a champion-only roleplay challenge! The only individuals that will be able to participate in this challenge are those that were selected as champions at the beginning of the tournament. If a champion is unable to participate in this challenge, each school has the option to substitute a champion for one challenge only! If your school chooses to substitute a champion for this task, it will not be able to substitute again.

- please sMail to receive your volunteer's number and symptoms! The order you sMail will determine which volunteer you are assigned.

As stated in the above, you are tasked with writing a roleplay showing your character diagnosing your volunteer's two ailments and coming up with a potion to counteract the effects. Most of these potions will need to be of your own design, since most (if not all) will not be found within the books or movies. So be creative with it and explain why you chose your ingredients!

Champions may work together with their school in their school's private forum group to brainstorm and proofread their entries, however the actual entry must be written by the champion and posted by the champion (or substitute, as may be the case).

This challenge will end Saturday, August 19th at 11:59PM.

All effort will be awarded with a base of 20 points, and any additional points will be awarded based on the following rubric:

RUBRIC CONVENTIONS 2 points - The errors in the grammar, capitalization, spelling, and punctuation interfere with understanding the entry. 3 points - There are a few errors in grammar, capitalization, spelling, and punctuation. 4 points - There are little to no errors in grammar, capitalization, spelling, and punctuation.

STYLE 2 points - Writing style is incredibly inconsistent in tense, point of view, and sentence structure and interferes with understanding the entry. Word choice does not vary. 4 points - Writing style a basic control of tense, point of view, and sentence structure. Word choice varies a little. 6 points - Writing style has a good control of tense, point of view, and sentence structure. Word choice varies and is descriptive. 8 points - Writing style has excellent control of tense, point of view, and sentence structure. Word choice is deliberate, descriptive, and sophisticated.

CREATIVITY OF SOLUTION 0 points - Entrant’s roleplay did not solve the task at hand OR used one of the restricted methods. (For example, if a student used a summoning charm when the task specifically mentioned that the summoning charm would not work.) 2 points - The solution used the simplest method available. (For example, entrant “found” an already made potion instead of brewing their own.) 4 points - The solution solved the task at hand, but lacked detail. 6 points - The solution solved the task with some detail and creativeness. 8 points - The solution solved the task in an innovative and resourceful way.

This means that the maximum amount of points to be earned from this challenge is 40 points - 20 just for entering and a maximum of 20 points from the rubric.

Please let me know if there are any questions or if there is anything I missed!

Aug 12, 2017 8 years ago
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for the spelling rubric, my question is, this I don't have to spell American right? I've always spelt and wrote British.

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British English is fine!

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cool thanks :D

Aug 14, 2017 8 years ago
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Are there any school books on the table for quick research or are the champions supposed to know the different ingredients by heart? Thanks in advance! :)

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Good question! I suppose it can't hurt to have a few copies of 1000 Magical Herbs and Fungi on the table, however there are no potion books.

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I didn't used any books on my draft. :3

Aug 15, 2017 8 years ago
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A question has been raised on our discussion board about spells. Potions are finished off by either waving a wand over the cauldron, or with an incantation. This is part of the potion-making process and won't count against us right?

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correct.

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EDIT: Never mind, problem solved. :)

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Teresa Evans, Hogwarts Champion

Teresa picked the volunteer number: number one. She headed in her direction. The girl appeared to have a nose as large as the rest of her head. It seemed to her that the girl in question had probably been in contact with a Swelling Solution and it got to her nose. The easiest solution for this was to use a Deflating Draught, though if her deduction was incorrect and the enlargement was not caused by it, this potion wouldn't be of help after all.

She was thoughtful for a moment. Using the wrong potion would not only cost her time, but also points on the task and so she had to be sure of the potion before acting. Using a different potion might have been her best bet, but no potion came to mind immediately so she decided to get work on the second symptom.

Luckily, Terry wasn't very expressive. The Hogwarts champion did her best to keep her face blank because all of that hair growing on the girl's feet was genuinely disgusting. The strands were long enough to be braided! Terry took a deep breath and kept her calm. She could do this! She only needed to look into her brain to find the answer.

Ingredients started popping into her mind one by one, and soon they gave her the answer to what potion she should brew.

“The Unwanted Thing Potion! Of course, it will remove the hair... let's see if they have the ingredients here.” Teresa went to the table and picked her ingredients: black cohosh, octopus powder, dried nettle, lizard's leg and - hopefully - unicorn hair.

“Oh yes! I'm in luck.” She then turned to the girl and gave her a false smile. “I need something from you, do you mind?” Without even letting the volunteer say a word, she pulled on the unwanted hair hard and took a few strands. “This will do.”

The pleased looked on Terry's face was undeniable. Potions was one of her strengths and there was no way she could fail this task or look bad in front of everyone. Hogwarts was counting on her and she was going to do her very best 'til the end. “You can do this.”

Stepping in front of the golden cauldron she began to recite the instructions in a very low voice. “Pick the dried nettle and crush it into the mortar until it's fine like powder. Yes, this will get rid of the hair: it will dry it until it falls out! Next, add two measures of the powder to the cauldron. In the mortar, grind three leaves of black cohosh until it forms a gooey paste. With this, any hormone disorders can be fixed since surely that is the cause of the hairy thing, ugh! Now, add that paste to the mix and stir gently one time clockwise.” Terry did as she recited and with a pleased smile continued her task. “Now cut the foot from the lizard's leg and add it to the cauldron. Heat for one minute on high and then lower the heat to low. The foot will indicate from where the hair should be removed."

As the champion waited for the minute to pass, she added both the strands of foot hair and the unicorn hair to the mortar and ground until the hair taken from the girl had turned silver in color. “This unicorn hair bound to the human hair will go straight to the problem – the hair.” She nods contently. “One minute has passed.” Terry turned the heat to low and added the silver hair to the cauldron. “Stir five times counter-clockwise and let it brew for two more minutes or until the color changes to purple.”

There was one last ingredient to add to the potion and once the color changed she added it, thinking 'Add one measure of octopus powder to increase the strength of the potion; now I'm sure it will get rid of that unwanted hair.' She waved her wand once and let the potion simmer for five minutes.

Once again Terry went through the potion steps in her head and nodded. She was sure it was perfect, so she put it aside and turned back to her next problem: that gigantic nose. “I'd better do something about that nose before you leave us without oxygen to breathe!”

Looking for a cure for the nose, the champion decided to ask the volunteer a question. “Excuse me, do you feel any other reaction besides the obvious big nose? Like dizziness, or fatigue?”

Volunteer number one shook her head as she responded. “No, only the big nose and a heavy head, surely because of the extra weight..”

“Definitively a lot of extra weight - it's like you have two heads!” She suddenly realized that was unnecessary and just continued. “I will go with the Dimini-Elixir then, that potion will return to normal any body part enlarged in size by any means. Alright, I'll be back soon with your remedy.”

“Thank you.” With hope in her voice the girl replied.

Immediately Terry went to the ingredients table. Seeing that one of her ingredients was unavailable, she decided to summon it from her personal belongings. It had been a gift from a friend back at Hogwarts, but she was sure he would understand why she had to use it now. “Accio Occamy feather!” She smiled the instant it arrived. “Such a pretty thing, too bad you'll be gone soon.” She had already gathered the rest of the materials. These included flobberworm mucus to help thicken the potion, the anti-inflammatory Boswellia Serrata, cinnamon (to give a hint of flavor whilst also getting rid of bacteria and reducing inflammation) and lastly, rat spleen which will induce the reduction in nose-size.

Back to her cauldron Terry went, and in she placed the ingredients in order of use. First the gum resin of the Boswellia Serrata would be used. “Add three measurements of boswellia and let it cook on a low heat for three minutes until it melts and turns to liquid, then stir five times in any direction.” As usual Terry said the instructions to herself as it was the way she always made potions. Plus, there was no way she could do it in absolute silence. Once the first step was done, step two was announced. “Add a pinch of cinnamon and stir once counter-clockwise. Let it brew for 30 seconds and then add two measurements of flobberworm mucus.” Terry wiped her head with a napkin. She was sweating with the heat of the cauldron beneath her, not only because it was very hot but also because the potion was producing light fumes. Once the fumes were gone she continued. “Stir the mixture twice counter-clockwise and add the rat spleen. Flick your wand once. Turn the heat to medium for 45 seconds exactly and then turn it off. Add one Occamy feather and stir once clockwise. Flick your wand three times.”

Soon the seconds had passed and she had the elixir ready and in a bottle with a dropper.

The time for the task was close to an end. Teresa Evans was proud of her work. The potion had the green color it should have had and was just the right thickness. She approached the girl waiting for a cure. “Alright Miss, you have to let the elixir rest under your tongue for twenty seconds before you swallow. In fact, it's hard to drink otherwise since it's a bit sticky! Once it's been in your mouth for the right amount of time it will be fine. Now open your mouth: it's two full droppers required for it to work best.”

“Does it taste bad?” The girl shyly asked.

“You'll find out soon, but don't spit it out or your nose will be big forever.” Terry smirked and it looked like the girl pulled a terrified look, but she couldn't exactly tell because of the size of the nose. The volunteer then nodded in agreement. The thick liquid went in and Terry placed her hand on top of the volunteer's mouth so that she couldn't spit it out. The thing tasted horrible and the texture was quite repugnant. After twenty seconds, she instructed the girl to swallow.

The volunteer touched her nose since it was still big and started to cry thinking that it might never change.

“Just be patient, it will work in a moment.” A minute after, the nose started shrinking little by little until it had reduced to its original size. “There you go, now you have a pretty face again.”

“THANK YOU! My nose is back to normal!” The volunteer was so excited that she hugged the champion tight, but Terry shoved her off. Hugging made her feel uncomfortable.

“Alright, alright! Now you still have to take the other potion, so drink this next and the unwanted hair will be gone in just a few moments.” She handed over the bottle filled with the purple liquid and the volunteer looked at it with a hint of disgust.

“Will this taste as bad as the other?” She seemed to be apprehensive, especially after the taste of the first potion.

“It's that or the hair; you choose,” Terry said honestly to the sad girl.

“I'll take it.” In one short go the volunteer drank the entire potion, though the look on her face proved how bad it tasted. “EWW! It was disgusting!”

“Surely no more disgusting than those hairy feet,” Terry said coldly and the poor girl blushed. “Now watch the hair dry and fall off.” Magically, the hair turned to ashes leaving her feet perfectly beautiful. “Now look at that, you actually have toes!” She chuckled and patted the girl's shoulders. “You are cured.”

“Thanks again for this, it felt and looked terrible! Now you are my favorite champion, best of luck!” Another hug was given to the Hogwarts student who accepted it this time.

“Thank you.” Terry blushed after her declaration which caused her to smile. She then turned to the judges. “I'm done, the girl is healed of both symptoms.”

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River Alcott 1st Task, 4A River was excited and extremely nervous to receive the first task. She followed along with the staff members into the Great Hall. When she discovered that it was not an action packed task, she was a little disappointed. Instead of climbing the peak and looking for Jabberknolls, fighting a troll or the many other possibilities that had been running through her head during classes, she had to brew a potion. Yes, it was safe to say she was disappointed and her mind briefly wondered how interesting it would be for all the spectators to watch six students make potions. Still, it did use intellect and problem solving. River was exceptionally pleased that she had good marks in her potions classes and was confident that she wasn’t going to make anyone turn into something horrible or cause the volunteers pain. This was important—surely they deducted points for causing pain, right?

She needed to calm herself and focus. They were about to assign the volunteer numbers. She thought of her guardian, Gabriel, who was so thoroughly supportive of her that could practically hear his words of encouragement. “You’ll be wonderful sweetie,” he would say, “You’ve got this.” Then he would give her a hug. She smiled imagining Gabriel pacing up and down his cabin and waiting for her to get far enough away after the challenge to get a decent cellular signal so she could fill him in on the task and he’d know she was safe. Thoughts of her boyfriend, Merlin Pendragon from Hogwarts, entered her mind. River’s smile deepened. She thought of the bright smile and positive attitude he had. He was so confident in her. She scanned for his long white hair in the crowd, which was by far the quickest way to identify him. When she spotted him she gave a small wave. His smile and wave made her much calmer. She could do this.

The volunteers took their places and then one by one the champions drew their numbers from the bag. When it was her turn, she placed her hand in the bag and pulled out the parchment which was blank save for a neatly written number two. Magically, River’s name appeared above her volunteer. Once everyone had their numbers, and they were told the task officially had started, the she went up to inspect her volunteer. The first thing she noticed about the boy was he had orange ooze coming from his nose. He started trying to speak but it was complete gibberish. River took a moment to think of what could be plaguing the boy.

There were two cauldrons at her table one for each potion. To keep track of which potion was which, she waved her wand over the first cauldron, which now had lettering on it saying “ooze.” Then she waved her hand at the other cauldron and it now had lettering saying “gibberish.” Now, she wasn’t sure exactly what was causing the gibberish, but she was pretty sure she knew what was causing the orange ooze. She had a friend who was allergic to pineapple. The poor guy had a recent scare with that. Of course this wasn’t a normal allergy, it was an allergic reaction to dirigible plums. Not only was the ooze the exact colour of the fruit but little flecks of the ooze was starting to float. River picked up a shrivelfig and began finely chopping it up. The shrivelfig was a very useful ingredient in many potions as the plant had magical properties. Then she took a bezoar and put it in her mortar and began crushing it with her pestle. Bezoars cured almost every kind of poison and an allergic reaction was essentially just that—poison. She picked up some standard ingredient, two fire seeds, graphorn horn, billywig stings, chizpurfle carapaces and stewed mandrake from the ingredient table. Now she was ready to begin making the potion. Time management was important so she would get the potion started and then work on breaking down the other pieces whilst her potions were brewing.

First she added four measures of the crushed bezoar into her potion, along with two measures of standard ingredient—the same as an antidote. Now she now added the finely chopped shrivelfig to the potion and stirred it counter-clockwise for three turns. Then she waved her wand to increase the heat. Counting out ten seconds, she returned it to the lower temperature and put a magical alarm on her cauldron so it could brew for thirty minutes.

Whilst her first potion was brewing, she turned her attention to the second potion. Before curing him, she had to think about what was wrong. What could be causing the speaking gibberish problem? Then she almost face palmed herself. Of course! If a wizard was in a depression and he used too much magic, it was possible to give himself a magical concussion. That would explain the speaking gibberish. Nodding to herself, she hurried over to the ingredients and grabbed St. John’s Wort, mandrake roots, moonstone, hellebore, and unicorn horn.

She carefully sliced a ½ measure of St. John’s Wort. St. John’s Wort has been used with muggles for simply ages to help battle depression. Of course, Muggles didn’t know how to tapper some of the effects it had on their other medicines, but in a potion it would go a long way to helping the magical concussion. She added the St. John’s Wort to her cauldron along with 5 measures of standard ingredient. Then she carefully shaved a small amount off the unicorn horn and added it to her potion. Unicorns were so magical that only a pinch was needed. She stirred the concoction two turns to the left and three turns to the right before waving her wand to increase the heat. After five seconds she waved her wand again and counted an additional ten seconds at this even higher temperature before she returned it to the lower heat. She added a magical timer to this potion for forty minutes. She wiped some sweat from her face. It was warm near the cauldrons, plus she was nervous about the time. It was a good thing she didn’t have a watch or she might be checking it every few moments, which would hinder her progress for sure.

Returning to the first potion, River began to prepare the ingredients for the next step. She put the graphorn horn into her mortar and began to crush it into a powder. This was one of those expensive ingredients they mentioned. After obtaining two measures of it and adding that to her potion, she put the rest of the horn back with the rest of the supplies. She added her two fire seeds to the potion and then waved her wand and counted out 13 seconds. Stirring the potion clockwise twice, she then lowered the heat and reset her alarm for thirty more minutes.

Working on the second potion ingredients she chopped up the mandrake roots. Mandrake roots were so versatile. Then she crushed the moonstone into powder. The hellebore had to be finely chopped. Hellebore, along with the moonstone, were components of the draught of peace and excellent candidates to help in relieving the magical concussion.

When the timer was up for her second potion, she added the hellebore and increased the heat to her cauldron for 6 seconds. Afterwards she lowered her flames and added the mandrake roots. Stirring clockwise for two minutes and counter clockwise for two turns, she set her alarm again and went to check on the first potion.

It was now time to add the billywig stings, chizpurfle carapaces to her potion. Both, along with the graphorn horn and fire seeds, were used in the uncommon poison antidote potion. Once she put in the measure of stings and the ¼ measure of carapaces into her potion it turned gross snot green, meaning it was nearing completion. The only thing remaining it need was the stewed mandrakes. But first it had to simmer.

Time was moving so fast, which made the teen fret a little as she checked on her second potion, the one for the concussion. She added the 2 measures of powered moonstone and with a satisfying pop from the potion as it turned a pretty shade of lilac, River knew her concussion potion was ready, save for the quick wave of her wand to finish it, before she removed the heat. She transferred it to a flask. Carefully she took her potion to her volunteer and saw that it was ingested. There was no real smell from this potion so she had no idea how it would taste; however, when the boy wrinkled his nose it was apparent the potion didn’t taste too good. Still within moments he glowed yellow for a brief moment and smiled. With a “Thank you,” from him she knew the cure worked.

Now she went back to check on the dirigible plum allergy potion. Finally it was time to add in the stewed mandrakes. She raised the heat for three seconds and watched it change colour to yellow. Then it changed to purple when she stirred it counter clockwise for 5 turns. The pretty pink colour was obtained after lowering the heat for three second and turning the potion twice clockwise. The last stage was another simmer then the final colour change of light blue. Finally she waved her wand saying “sana” and paused before ending the potion with “Finite.” Sana was Latin for heal or healthy and the words added to the magic of the potion. To River it smelt musty and the texture looked like curdled milk.

She took the potion over to the boy and was so pleased to see him drink. He made a horrible expression of disgust drinking it. “Sorry,” she said, “but most potions aren’t very tasty.” Tasty or not, the ooze suddenly stopped and shrivelled up into a nasty large orange bugger. The boy removed it with his handkerchief just as time was called. The task was over. River was very relieved as she could still feel her heart pounding. Only knowing the scores would help with the remaining jitters though.

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[spoiler=Lenore Addlebourne - Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry]

Lenore took a deep breath as she entered Ilvermorny’s Great Hall. As she walked, she closed her eyes and focused on continuing her slow, deliberate breaths, as was her habit when forced to walk toward something that peaked her anxiety. And if she had ever walked into anxiety-inducing territory, this large room was certainly it. Somehow she stopped just short of bumping into the back of the champion ahead of her, the tall dark-haired boy, Corvus. Apparently, with her eyes closed, her other senses had been guiding her sub-consciously.

"The time has finally come, champions! Your first task begins today," she heard Professor Fontaine say, her loud voice echoing from the front of the room. It seemed to bounce off of the walls, surrounding Lenore like some ominous charm. It was this that brought to her the realization that the rest of the crowd had gone silent. There was a pause that hung palpably in the air. Lenore shifted from one foot to the other. Finally, Professor Fontaine continued, "As you can plainly see from the table behind me, your task will be involving your potion making skills.”

Lenore’s heart seemed impossibly to sink into her stomach and rise into her throat simultaneously. Potions were easily her worst subject. Swallowing deeply, she attempted to regain control of her throat which seemed to have shrunken to a pinhole, and to coax some saliva back into her parchment-dry mouth. The desire to simply turn around and stride out of the Great Hall nearly overwhelmed her. This was not an unfamiliar thought to her as she had fled from many things in the past. But it was an uncomfortable one. This was not something that she could run from without consequence. This task involved not just herself, but the whole of Hogwarts and every student therein. Strangely this thought strengthened her rather than heightened her fear. She was needed. She alone could do what others were in no position to attempt. Her emotions receding, it was her logical mind that stepped in and took over. She breathed easier.

"One more thing to remember," Professor Persnickety said, "is that these ailments will not be able to be cured by spells. Only potions will work." Lenore’s attention returned to the front of the room where Professor Persnickety had taken over speaking. Lost in her thoughts, she had forgotten to pay attention to most of the instructions but the task seemed obvious anyway: brew potions to cure some sort of horrible ailments. Lenore’s assumption was confirmed when Professor Fontaine introduced the volunteers.

Six students had filed into the room, each one looking more disfigured and uncomfortable than the last. Moving around Corvus to get a better look, Lenore watched as the students took their seats. One girl could hardly move due to a large quantity of long dark hair that had sprouted from her feet. It dragged behind her swishing and tangling. A chorus of mingled awe and disgust could be heard from the mass of students gathered around the room. The silence that had reigned during the professors’ introduction had broken. All around, students were chattering, laughing and pointing, obviously enjoying the spectacle of their suffering classmates. Lenore had to admit that some of the ailments were comical. The hairy-footed girl’s nose had swollen up so badly that it looked more like a large fleshy squash than anything that belonged on a human face. Balancing the bulbous swelling in one hand, she seemed to be taking the change to her appearance in good spirits and gave a small wave to a group of her friends who were calling excitedly to her from the crowd. A few of the other students, however, looked quite uncomfortable. The boy walking toward the seat that was placed below the large number ‘6’ kept sneezing loudly. As he instinctively reached up to cover his mouth, Lenore could see that his hands were covered in a bright purple rash.

As the students against the walls continued their chatter, Professor Fontaine passed around a velvet bag full of numbers. Lenore glanced quickly at the volunteers and noted the number of the girl with the hairy feet. Shuddering, she uttered a small plea, “not number one.” When the bag was held out in front of her, Lenore squeezed her eyes shut and plunged her hand into its depths. She felt her touch fall onto a small piece of paper and seized it. Pulling it out she saw that it bore a single number ‘6.’ Sighing with relief at having avoided dealing with the foot hair, Lenore looked back to volunteer number six. The sneezing, purple-handed boy was now attempting to wipe the trickle of tears running from his eyes with his rash-covered hand. This seemed to have the effect only of making the purple spread further up his wrist. She continued watching as the boy became intrigued by the spreading of his own rash, pulling up the sleeve of his robe for a better look. Suddenly she realized that one of the Professors was calling the start of the task. “Two hours!”

Wait! Now? She had been given no time to prepare. Thoughts began running through Lenore’s mind at a furious pace. Many were only half-formed before they were pushed out by new ones, each determined to take center attention. The noise of the students was ringing in her ears. She quickly trotted over to her volunteer and the sound of his sneezing added to the chaos attacking her concentration.

“Argh!” Lenore began to pace, frustrated. Her time was ticking and she couldn’t think!

”…these ailments will not be able to be cured by spells. Only potions will work." Professor Persnickety’s words echoed in Lenore’s mind. That’s it! Spells! Wandwork was where Lenore excelled and she quickly drew her wand and pointed it directly at her volunteer. ”Silencio!” The boy jumped when he saw the wand in his face and toppled out of his seat, causing the crowd to erupt in laughter. Getting back to his feet and rubbing his backside, he gave Lenore a watery-eyed scowl and climbed back into his seat. He was still sneezing but completely silent. Without the benefit of sound, he now looked as though he was having some strange type of convulsions. Now for the rest of this noisy lot. Turning toward the crowd on one side, Lenore paused. She couldn’t silence them all without taking too much time. She also doubted that the judges would allow it. Instead she performed a quick charm to create an almost invisible bubble. As the bubble came out of her wand, small and then growing to engulf both herself and the boy on the stool, as well as her cauldrons, it reflected the light of the room in soft, swirling colors, and completely blocked out the sounds of the hall. Though it covered a decent amount of floorspace, it wasn't quite big enough to cover her prep table, and the ingredients table was well out of reach. She would just have to deal without them. That’s better. she thought. She had taken care of the setting, now she could figure out…

Time. Lenore pointed her wand into the air and long golden ribbons slithered from the tip, twisting themselves to form numbers indicating one hour and fifty-five minutes in the air. The ribbons would rearrange to count down the time, telling her exactly how many minutes she had left. She looked around her bubble. All she needed now was parchment. She needed to get precise instructions and she thought best on paper. She looked hopefully across the hall at the long tables and saw that there was no parchment but there were plenty of other items. Thinking quickly, she summoned what she needed. ”Accio porcupine quill! Accio squid ink!” The items flew to her and she caught them. Quickly tearing the label off of the squid ink, she turned it upside down to reveal a blank back. She picked up the porcupine quill and opened the now label-free bottle.

Water! she remembered. Dropping her quill, she sprinted to the two cauldrons that she had been provided (both gold), and quickly prodded the wood underneath with her wand, causing two orange fires to burn brightly. She turned and began the sprint back, passing her still silent volunteer with a small, “Back in a jiffy!”

Grabbing her ink and label again, she plopped to the ground and began writing. She quickly printed ‘Sneezing’ at the top of the label and underlined it. Here she paused and tapped the top end of the quill on her pursed lips pensively, causing ink to fly off in little drops. She couldn’t remember a potion for sneezing being mentioned in class and she had an excellent memory. Unfortunately, she had never cared enough about potions to research anything further than her assignments required. Logically now, Lenore. she thought to herself. How could this have been caused? The tapping of her quill stopped and an “Ah” escaped her lips. Forget the cause. The cause is irrelevant. The symptom is an involuntary reaction of the body. Involuntary reactions can be targeted by potions. Hiccoughs are an involuntary reaction. I can alter the Cure for Hiccoughs! This daisy-chain of thoughts ran through her head at high-speed as though carried along by a current. Quickly, she copied down the ingredients for the Cure for Hiccoughs from memory, crossing out items here and there and replacing them with new ones. As she wrote she whispered quickly to herself. Her eyes glinted with the excitement of exercising her mind and she began to take on the air of one possessed.

“Bicorn horn is used for altering the body which is why it is used in both physical remedies and the Polyjuice Potion.” She waved her wand toward the far table without bothering to look up, causing a mortar and pestle and one horn of bicorn to fly through the air and land neatly beside her. Another quick movement of the wand broke off a piece of the twisted horn and a third set the pestle to grinding by itself.

“Mandrake root is in nearly every healing potion and restores wellness to the body.” Again she pointed her wand and this time it was a small silver knife that accompanied her required ingredient. Setting the knife to thinly slicing the root she winced. This root still had a face on it.

“The Cure for Hiccoughs adds spiders here.” Lenore stopped and tapped her fingernails on the floor, thinking. “I don’t need to induce fear, I need to stop…sneezewort!” She wrote down the next ingredient and summoned the dry leaves from the table. These needed to be crushed but that would come later when she added them to the water.

“Water!” Lenore yelped out loud. She had forgotten about the cauldrons. She sprang up and dashed to the cauldrons which were now bubbling furiously. Poking at the flames with her wand she succeeded in bringing the boil down to a simmer. She ran back toward her parchment and was stopped midway. The sneezing boy was grabbing furiously at her robes.

”What?” she shouted. She hated having her thoughts interrupted and was irritated at the pulling. Looking over she saw that the boy was pointing angrily at his arms which were now covered in purple dots. He lifted up his robes to reveal his chest which was equally afflicted.

“Oh.” she said apologetically. “Er, I’m working on that. Just…hold tight.” The boy opened his mouth and began to shout silently at her. Lenore had the feeling she could guess what he was saying.

Lenore glanced up at her ribbon clock which showed that she had just under an hour and a half left. She had to be faster. Dropping back to her parchment she decided to skip writing the rest. It was taking too much time and she only needed two more ingredients anyway. She waved her wand to stop the pestle and knife which fell to the floor with a clatter. Scooping up her now ready ingredients she ran back to the cauldron, skirting around the boy who continued to flail madly. I guess he’s been told not to leave his stool. Lenore though to herself and silently thanked the judges.

Once she was at her first cauldron she began talking herself through the steps.

“Add the powdered horn.” She sprinkled it carefully over the surface of the bubbling water so it wouldn’t clump.

“Stir three times clockwise then add the mandrake root while changing to a counter-clockwise motion.” She counted to three and dropped in the roots, changing direction. “How long do I keep sti…” She didn’t have time to finish her question before the potion gave off a short wailing sound, much like the cry of a mandrake from a great distance. "I guess that did it." She shrugged and continued on. "Now I need to let it boil for five minutes." She pointed her wand and another clock formed in the air. This one remained unmoved at five minutes, hovering overhead. She watched the potion carefully, prodding at the flames to strengthen them while her wand was pointed toward the clock. "And...now!" The cauldron began to boil and the clock began to move.

Lenore turned toward the table and summoned the last two items. A small crystal and a jar of green slime soared through the air and she caught them. Quickly she grabbed the crystal and began to crush it in the mortar. "Sal ammoniac, standard ingredient in healing potions and part of the original Cure for Hiccoughs." Knowing that her time was ticking, she ground furiously. As the last few seconds counted down Lenore felt as if her arm was on fire but the crystal had become a nice even powder. She stood up and watched the ribbon change, holding the powder above the cauldron. Five, four, three, two, one...She poured the powder into the cauldron and the until now colorless liquid turned a brilliant blue. Quickly she went to the next step, stirring the potion seventeen times, alternating clockwise and counter-clockwise. She waved her wand twice over the cauldron and then picked up the dried sneezewort leaves and rubbed them between her hands, letting the broken pieces fall into the potion.

"Just one thing left." She smiled to herself. She was being exact and everything was working. Flicking her wand, she extinguished the fire. “Jellied murtlap tentacle, ugh." Grimacing, she looked at the jar. "One glob is required." She recited from memory. "What the heck is one glob? Gosh, this is why I hate potions. Can't the instructions make sense? An idea struck her. "No reason not to try." She muttered. She closed her eyes and pictured as clearly as she could her Professor from Hogwarts scooping a glob of some gelatinous purple substance. Once she had visualized the size of the glob she said, “Accio murtlap tentacle glob!” To her grateful surprise, a small blob separated itself from the ooze in the jar and Lenore quickly flicked it into the cauldron with her wand. Passing her wand over the potion one last time, she uttered the counter-curse for the sneezing hex. She watched as the bright blue turned steadily to the color of bogies. "Perfect!" She beamed. She picked up a golden goblet that had been provided for the task and ladled some of the potion into it. It had the consistency of snot and stretched as she pulled the ladle out, jiggling and finally letting go with a sloop. “Well, here goes nothing.” she said aloud as she turned toward the boy.

By this time the boy had given up on his attempts to communicate with Lenore. He sat with his shoulders slumped and his arms crossed grumpily over his chest. The look he gave her between his silent sneezes was scathing. I suppose I might have paid him more attention. Lenore thought but it was too late now and she really did have to get this task finished.

“This should fix that right up for you.” she said brightly. The boy returned her smile with a rather pointed gesture.

“Alright, I suppose I deserve that. But drink this just the same. And after you stop that sneezing I can take the silencing charm off you. Just don’t go yelling at me or I’ll put it right back on!” she warned. Handing over the cup, Lenore watched as the boy took a sip and nearly vomited. There was a long green string stretching shakily from his lips to the goblet. Lenore took it from him and set it down, getting squelchy goo on her finger. She reached for her robe then thought better of it and wiped her finger off on the boy’s robe instead. She felt a sharp pain in her arm as the boy slapped it.

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The excited atmosphere in the Great Hall of Ilvermorny castle was almost graspable. Students were talking about the first task and their whispered words filled the air. Corvus remained with the other champions and quickly looked over the crowd, trying to spot a certain person before he leaned back a bit. If Elizabeth had been here today, she would have written to him before, correct? The owl was probably late...or she was somewhere in the crowd and the massive amount of students just made it difficult to spot her - which was the explanation he gave himself. Only now he noticed how full the Great Hall was. And how loud with the frequent buzzing of different conversations.

What a waste, they're not even participating. At least they're not cheering loudly as if we were at a quidditch match, he thought when some students started to cheer upon the sight of the champions.

Great, he thought and sighed annoyed. Not looking at anyone, he was trying to recall some useful knowledge, though his concentration was disturbed again when the person behind him bumped into him. It was the small blonde-haired Hogwarts champion, Lenore. Normally he would have been really upset, but she seemed to be nervous and at least she wasn't talking nonsense. Then, she wasn't talking at all. He eyed her carefully for a moment before turning his gaze back to the tables where he spotted the cauldrons. A smile crawled on his lips. Potion brewing. This would be easy and thankfully nothing reckless. He had read about earlier triwizard tournaments where students had to battle dragons and a cockatrice and it seemed that the different ministries and the headmasters of participating schools had learned their lesson.

Finally, the headmasters silenced the crowd which Corvus was glad for. Professor Fontaine started explaining the task and Corvus listened carefully. In his mind, he was already starting to think about useful herbs, though he did not know his volunteer or his or her ailments yet. For a short moment, he wondered if Elizabeth...but no, she wouldn't have been that stupid to volunteer for a triwizard task. And he was really, really glad about being so sure about her when the six volunteers emerged from the crowd. It was a rather disgusting sight. There was a boy with rash, another girl had long hair growing off her feet and Corvus took a deep breath. Obviously, it had been clear that the different ailments would look revolting, but the headmasters had outdone themselves.

Corvus heard a lot of the students in the crowd laugh at the sight of the volunteers and many were pointing a finger to certain volunteers. He shook his head at such immature behaviour. Certainly, not everyone was a person of good breeding, some were just depicting bad manners. A group of students was laughing loudly at the girl who had pretty long hair on her feet and Corvus looked at these students, narrowing his eyes before frowning at them. The laughter stopped abruptly when they noticed his gaze and Corvus seemed pretty amused about that. Yes, he was often really thankful for the steely glance his face expressed. Additionally, being an exceptionally bright student and now a triwizard champion surely had its advantages.

Finally, it was time to begin. With a deep breath, Corvus took a step forward to Professor Fontaine to get his volunteer's number. Reaching into the little red velvet bag, he searched for one of the little notes. While stepping back to let the next champion choose a number, he carefully opened his note.

An elegant '4' was written on the parchment and Corvus glanced shortly at the volunteers taking their seats. His eyes remained on the person on the stool that was decorated with number four. So let's see..., Corvus thought and eyed the young man carefully while he was approaching him. Steam was coming out of his ears and Corvus made a quick mental calculation about useful herbs and ingredients he ever heard of. “Hello, my name is Corvus Farlan Montgomery from the great house of the Horned Serpent and I will be treating you today”, he said, half-joking, half-serious. He offered the man his hand and he took it carefully and somewhat wary, but remained silent. Probably thinks I'm just a pretty face with no brain, huh?, Corvus thought with furrowed eyebrows and paused, recalling the words of Professor Fontaine.

So this would be the second ailment. Not being able to speak, mhm., Corvus concluded and was glad that he discovered both symptoms so quickly. In fact, he was even more pleased that he didn't have to make a conversation while trying to work. Grabbing a fresh piece of parchment, his quill and a bottle of ink, he quickly made a note.

Volunteer number 4 has steam coming out of his ears and seems incapable of speaking.

Then he turned back to his volunteer. “Don't worry, I'm taking care of your ailments and you will be hale and hearty soon.”, he said with a smile to encourage them. Usually, Corvus didn't smile often, but this was a different case. It was a triwizard task after all and therefore of much importance. Highly motivated, Corvus started by taking notes. Being an excellent student, he had a profound knowledge of herbs and potions and knew many effects of different herbs. However, it wouldn't be bootless to have a look at 'One Thousand Magical Herbs and Fungi'. He skimmed through the pages in search for useful herbs regarding the ailments of his volunteer, keeping in mind that the time frame for the task was short and strict. There was no time to search too long - after all, time was money.

Luckily and thanks to years of studying, Corvus knew most of the herbs by heart and only had to consult the book a few times. Time was breathing down his neck and he knew that the volunteer was suffering. He could hear, see and feel the steam. Corvus eyed him shortly. Since the volunteer wasn't able to speak, he didn't even know his name. What a shame., he thought. While taking notes, the black-haired student noticed that his volunteer also seemed to sweat a bit which wasn't a surprise to him as the steam was coming out for roughly fifteen minutes now.

Poor thing, he thought. It was even more difficult since the volunteer wasn't able to speak. Verbal communication wouldn't be an option. He risked a glance at the other champions and shook his head almost unnoticeable. He had to focus on the task and prevent himself from looking at the clock too much. This would make him nervous and vulnerable for careless mistakes.

Due to collecting himself while taking notes, his thoughts were crowned with success. The Volubilis potion crossed his mind which would probably deal with the volunteer's incapability of speaking. This was a potion that could alter the drinker's voice, but also restores their voice if it's lost. However, Corvus knew that he would have to modify the potion. 'One Thousand Magical Herbs and Fungi' remembered him of a useful magical plant called screechsnap, which has the ability to move and make noise. In conclusion, the black-haired boy had decided that he would include this plant in his own potion creation. After many deliberations, he was sure that screechsnap could boost the effect of the brew because it was very logical to him that the plant would bring the voice of the volunteer back as the plant itself can make noise. With that in mind, Corvus looked delighted at his parchment, quickly re-read everything and then stepped forward to gather the ingredients he considered.

It was a relief to see that every ingredient he had noted was available at the table. He had squinted his eyes trying to see the herbs, plants and other substances while making his potion draft, but back then, he wasn't able to tell for sure. He quickly collected the required ingredients, making sure he chose those looking best and fresh.

A rather boastful smile stole itself on his lips when he was going back to his place. Arranging the gathered ingredients in a logical order on the wooden table, he started with the screechsnap and began to pluck the petals off, adding them to the cauldron. Each time when he added five petals, he stirred the potion clockwise. He repeated this procedure for a maximum of 25 petals, then let it simmer while he looked at his notes before picking the mandrake leaves from his table. The mandrake was an essential part of most antidotes and had a sedative effect which would make the volunteer less nervous, too. Corvus left the mixture of screechsnap and mandrake leaves cooking for five minutes.

Reminded of the constant low sound of steam coming out of his volunteer's ears, he turned around to check at him, making sure the symptoms haven't gotten worse. Corvus noticed small beads of sweat on the volunteer's face, which were caused by the steam. He walked over to him and pointed his wand at him. “Tergeo”, he said quietly and the sweat disappeared. The volunteer, a bit surprised, nodded thankfully and Corvus stepped back to his cauldron with a smile on his lips. Showing that I have a good heart, check., he thought amused.

Next was the syrup of Hellebore, and he had to be very careful with it as it was a quite poisonous plant. He shook the bottle with the blue liquid gently until tiny bubbles ascended from the bottleneck and then poured two drops of the syrup into the cauldron. The shaking would loosen the composition of the syrup a bit. In fact, Corvus had only added this liquid because it was required in the Volubilis potion and from his research he knew that hellebore had been used to treat paralysis and the volunteer's incapacity of speaking could be a certain kind of paralysis. Aside from that, he had made sure that two drops wouldn't be harmful. The potion took a more greenish tone.

He looked at it with a pleased face and reached over the table to grab a couple of mint sprigs. These were mostly for flavour, but also helpful to cure common cold and infections of the throat. Therefore, they would actually deal with both ailments as they would ease the pain that was caused by the steam coming out of the volunteer's ears and probably help with the incapability of speaking. Adding seven mint sprigs to his brew, he took a short breath of it to smell the delightful scent of peppermint. These last ingredients were mostly added to improve the taste, but they still had healthy qualities. It was very important to add them at the end because the taste could disappear due to the long brewing. Waving his wand over the cauldron, the potion slowly switched its colour to a nice turquoise. Now he had to wait for five minutes.

The last ingredient was simple - honeywater. It was used in the Volubilis potion as well and would make his creation sweeter and therefore easier to drink. He was sure that he would get a better grade if the potion cured the volunteer and had a great taste. This thought amused him and he grinned lightly before continuing with adding the honeywater. Honey was used often against hoarseness and honeywater was actually only honey diluted in water, so the potion wouldn't be too thick. He stirred it anti-clockwise for three times before letting it simmer on low heat for ten minutes. Then, a faint shimmer of gold appeared in the turquoise potion before Corvus waved his red oak wand over the cauldron. Small golden sparkles ascended from the potion and then disappeared a few inches over the cauldron.

Delighted, he poured a part of his completed potion into a small drinking bottle. He labelled it quickly with a spell - 'Incapability of speaking' - and walked over to the unused cauldron at his table.

Noticing how much the other volunteers the champions had to cure were talking, Corvus thought it would be better to wait until the end of the two hours to give both potions to the volunteer. And actually, if he remembered correctly, the judges said that the potions would be given when the two hours were over. He organized his working table and cleaned the used instruments as it could lead to fatal errors if he continued working with, for example, a pestle that still had old ingredients sticking to it. While carefully putting the ingredients he had already used away, the dark-haired boy registered the fresh scent of peppermint, coming from the mint sprigs he had used before. What a mind-refreshing scent, he thought and put it away as well to finally start with the second potion and turned towards the first substance - Bitterroot plant. The root needed to be cooked and therefore, after adding it to the cauldron, he heated his brew up to a high temperature. Now he had to wait until the solution, which had switched colours to a faint purple, was boiling. Bitterroot had strong anti-inflammatory effects and also calmed the nerves. Corvus had thought of this as a very good idea as the volunteer had to endure two hours of steam coming out of his ears. Definitely not a pleasant way to spend such a long time. While still waiting for the potion to boil, Corvus wondered if he would have volunteered for a task like this. Probably not, he thought to himself and shook his head, , no certainly not.

His thoughts were interrupted by the sound of the boiling potion, and he lowered the temperature again before looking into the cauldron to find a purple potion. The bitterroot plant had finally dissolved its active substances into the liquid and he extracted it from the cauldron with a flick of his wand. This was very important since bitterroot was a strong herb. The black-haired boy didn't want to place the cooked root next to the already used ingredients as it had lost its abilities due cooking and was dripping as well. With another flick of his wand and a quiet murmured “Evanesco”, the root disappeared and left nothing behind. Out of the corner of his eye, he now noticed a small waste bin next to the table with the ingredients. Whatever, and he shrugged his shoulders lightly, before smiling to himself. A waste bin would have been way too basic for a wizard. And why shouldn't I show off my abilities?, he thought amused and concentrated on the potion again.

It was bubbling peacefully now and Corvus began to add the next ingredient - ashwinder eggs. These would play the major part to get rid of the steam. The eggs were often used to cure ague, an illness characterised by alternating fits of fever, chills, and sweating, though the patient had to swallow the whole egg. Obviously Corvus couldn't make the volunteer eat one of the eggs - it would be too basic and probably not meet the expectations of the jury. He added four of these bright red eggs to the cauldron before stirring the brew clockwise for eight times, then anti-clockwise for four times. The colour of the potion switched to a deep burgundy.

He let the potion simmer for a while and looked at the brew. Corvus was aware that he had to wait some time and while he noticed that the other champions were talking with their volunteers, he was so glad again that he got the one who was unable to speak. He smiled upon this thought and started to wonder if ashwinders would be able to speak with Parselmouths? Would that make these creatures more alive even if they were just born from a magical fire that was left unattended? He had to ask Elizabeth about this later if she had ever spoken to an ashwinder. While he was waiting to go on - the potion had to be left alone for twenty minutes - Corvus decided to prepare the next ingredient, which was unicorn horn. He was very glad that some of these horns had been available. And this particular unicorn horn he got was shimmering in a perfect silver. How happy he had been when he spotted it at the table. It was perfectly curved and had no scratches - these would have ruined the healing qualities, at least in Corvus' mind. He was of the opinion that potion ingredients should always be in a flawless condition. Unicorn horn had strong purification properties and was therefore perfectly suited to dissolve poisons - Corvus was sure that the volunteer's had been given a light poison to develop the different ailments.

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Zala Tulasi - 4A The great hall was filled to the brim. Students lined the hall and chattered continuously. At the end stood several cauldrons and a couple tables covered in dried and fresh herbs and an assortment of colourful jars. In the middle sat 6 stools, one for each champion. Zala shuffled on her feet and glanced around. The championship would truly start now. There was no going back. Any minute now and they would be called forward.

She nervously stood with the other champions shyly waving to the Alexandrian classmates dotted around the room. Every now and then she nodded as the first task was explained. At first she frowned but soon she smiled inwardly. Somehow the first task had to be just up her alley and no matter what she’d have to be successful here. What a joke she’d be if the medical wing volunteer with a specialist herbology and potions background couldn’t solve this puzzle. Zala would have to prove she had the required knowledge and skills. Right then the volunteers were called forward. Grimacing at the various distressing ailments she gulped. Apparently they only had two hours. Two hours to figure it all out without outside help, brew the potions and cure their patient. She could do this she told herself. As long as she had everyone to support her she wasn’t going to let them down.

Zala’s turn to randomly choose her victim came. She wiped her sweaty palms on her dress and quickly headed for the velvet bag in professor Fontaine’s hands. She rummaged inside and pulled out a small slip of folded parchment. When she opened it she saw the large number 3 written on the piece and returned it to the professor. “That is volunteer three for Zala!”, professor Fontaine announced as Zala turned to her volunteer and stepped behind him. The boy was in a poor condition. His face and neck were covered in blue green scales. That alone wouldn’t be so bad, but the kid couldn’t stop bleating. ‘What sort of cruelty was that, making a kid bleat constantly in front of so many people. That has to be incredibly embarrassing.’, Zala thought shaking her head.

And then they were off! Or at least the clock had began counting. Zala patted the boy on his shoulder to reassure him and moved in front. She faced him looking very focussed, her eyes narrowing as she began checking a mental list. “Ok. Let’s figure this out quickly and get rid of the bleating first. At the very least I want to be able to talk properly...”, Zala muttered whilst prodding the bleating boy in various places. She tilted his head and looked closer at the scales. Touching them she noted their smooth texture. They were soft and pliable, moving and stretching as the skin underneath did. The scales were mostly green in colour though when they caught the light they hinted more towards a blue. The skin and scales were dry and the edges didn’t look flakey. “Can you shake or nod your head in answer to my questions?”, she inquired. The boy quickly nodded his head and looked expectantly straight at her face. “Good...”, Zala said and took a deep breath. “Do you feel an itch here or here?” she asked and touched behind his left ear and above his right eyebrow. The boy shook his head and Zala pointed at another scaly spot on his chin. The boy shook his head again and bleated loudly. “Then the skin condition isn’t urgent. Open your mouth.”, she nodded to herself. The boy probably had been given a Serpentine Salve of some sort. Those usually had a protective nature and were difficult to remove. She would have to practically burn the scales off and use a healing salve to prevent the skin from growing any new scales.

Moving on to diagnosing the second and far more embarrassing condition the boy had been given Zala peered inside the boy’s throat. His tonsils looked normal and she promptly closed his mouth. His eyes were normal too. Goats had strange pupils and that would have been a tell-tale sign he had been given Billy Brew. “Do you feel like eating grasses? Or fruits and veg?”, she continued examining him pushing on his sternum with the palm of her hand. She felt along his hairline here she didn’t find any horns or protrusions. The boy initially shook his head but then nodded slowly at her questions and hung his head in shame. Ten minutes had passed and Zala was ready to get going. The Billy Brew had been very diluted leaving the boy only with the bleating and slight changes in dietary wishes. Its effects were now similar to the Volubilis Potion, a potion Zala was familiar with. Thankfully both conditions seemed to be easily fixable, however the time limit could still be quite the challenge for her.

“It’s ok. I’ll fix you right up!”, Zala cheered and smiled at the kid. She moved to the ingredients table and rummaged around picking herbs left and right. The honeywater and syrup of hellebore she selected were both needed for the Volubilis Potion and she thought they could work as a base for her cure. The honeywater would be soothing to the throat and a drop of the syrup should help treat the involuntary bleating aspect of the condition. Just the 2 wouldn’t be enough however. Soon enough she spotted some agrimony. That was a herb often used in the Alexandrian Infirmary, generally for clearing the throat. She picked a few measurements and glanced at the table again. Among the dried herbs were some mushrooms Zala identified as cordyceps. Those worked especially well on coughs and made breathing much easier. Near the mushrooms Zala saw a few pieces of bark. She picked one up and looked at the pattern and colour. It looked a lot like black cherry bark and Zala hoped she was correct. If so then these 5 ingredients should be enough to brew a gargle solution to counteract the effects of the Billy Brew.

Zala moved to her cauldron and laid down the gathered ingredients. This first potion she was going to create required her to be very concentrated. The timing would be crucial to its success. She poured a large amount of honeywater into the cauldron and slowly heated it. In a mortar she crushed the cherry bark into a powder and measured half a teaspoon. She set the powder aside and cleaned her mortar. On a chopping board she thinly sliced the agrimony and cordyceps. Once the first bubbles appeared in the honeywater she turned the heat under the cauldron down to the lowest it could go. The mixture could not come to the boil. First Zala added the teaspoon of bark powder to the cauldron and stirred 3 times counterclockwise. The pale golden liquid in the cauldron lost some of its colour and became more translucent as the powder dissolved. The almost clear warm liquid then had the finely chopped mushroom added to it. Zala added 2 measurements and watched as a yellow colour appeared from the bits as they absorbed the liquid. She stirred clockwise once and waited for 10 seconds before stirring the pot once more. Then she added 4 measurements of agrimony waiting for the herbs to steep. The colour of the liquid increased in intensity and took on a more red hue. Almost as if it was a normal tea. The concoction was transferred through a sieve into a cold cauldron. Zala fished the swollen mushroom pieces out of the residue and mashed them quickly in the mortar. Adding 1 measurement to the tea the colour changed from a dark orange into an intense deep red. Satisfied with the deep red colour Zala added one drop of the Hellebore Syrup and her potion began giving off a pale blue smoke. She waved her wand over the potion and muttered softly. “Anapneo.”, she spoke softly willing the breathing spell to finish her work. “Fingers crossed.”, she sighed and poured the drink into a tall glass. Its temperature had cooled down to a pleasant warmth and she handed the glass to her volunteer along with a bucket. “You must gargle 3 times for 10 seconds each with this drink.”, Zala instructed the boy and turned back to her cauldron to clean the table.

The kid took a big mouthful and tried his best to gargle. His eyes watered at the strong sweet smell coming from the drink. After the first time he tried to say thank you but a weak bleat left his mouth. Another gargle later and the kid sat coughing for a full minute. Some of the drink had gone down. “Carefully now!”, Zala scolded him. The third gargle proofed successful and finally the boy stopped bleating. “Thank you!!”, the boy grinned. “That was really awful... If I had known I’d be turned into a half-goat I wouldn’t have signed up for this! Like I knew I’d get something weird, but this is just too weird. I’m Steve by the way! You’re from 4A right? I wish I’d gone to a school in Egypt. You’ve got to have mummies everywhere and like the best weather all the time!”, Steve chattered on and on. Zala began to regret having cured him of his bleating. That would have been a better alternative to this continuous babbling. “If you’re not going to stop soon I’m going to silence you myself, kid.”, Zala threatened pointing her wand at Steve instead of the now cleaned cauldron. Steve nodded his head and chose to close his mouth. He mimed zipping it and locking it with a key. After confirming the kid would be silent for a few minutes she turned back to her table and quickly wiped it with a cloth. “So... Steve. Please do cooperate. I only have a little over an hour left and you’re still covered in scales.”, Zala told him. Thankfully the boy nodded and remained seated on his stool as he followed Zala with his eyes.

Zala returned to the ingredients table. She already had a few in mind for her Cleansing Cream. All the ingredients involved could clear the skin of impurities or promoted the growth of new cells underneath or worked in a soothing manner. As a base she chose a yellowish white beeswax. Removing the scales from the skin would require something strong. She figured a hint of salamander blood, some crushed snake fangs and a measurement of mashed burdock would do the trick. As far as soothing and healing went she chose some dittany, aloe, lemongrass and calendula. So long as she could balance these ingredients well she should have a pretty good Cleansing Cream. Zala returned to her table and sat down. How many measurements of each should she use? Should she extract the effective substances from the plants or directly blend them into the salve? She grabbed her quill and wrote down a few combinations. With 50 minutes left on the clock she figured she had the balance right. It wouldn’t be perfect but it’d do the job. That would have to do. The medical team here at Ilvermorny would still have to keep an eye on him.

With a basic recipe written down Zala quickly got to work. She spared a moment to look at the other champions. Most seemed to be working on something and some started curing their volunteers. Taking note of the overall progress Zala quickened her own. First she crushed a pair of snake fangs into a coarse powder and set it aside. Then she measured out 1 inch of burdock root and a handful of seeds and mashed them in her mortar. She added three drops of salamander blood to the burdock mixture and continued grinding it into a dark brown paste. In her cauldron she softened 5 measurements of the creamy beeswax and added 2 scoops of the burdock and blood paste as well as ⅔ of the fang powder. This she mixed in well into the beeswax and then she waved her wand once over her cauldron. Zala quickly cleaned her mortar and pestle and picked 10 calendula flowers. Adding those to her mortar she glanced at her recipe. ‘Yeah… One measurement of lemongrass should be enough…’, she thought and chopped it into smaller pieces and added them to the flowers. With a bit of strength she managed to ground the two herbs into a pulp and used a spoon to add it to the cauldron. A quick stir later saw them mixed throughout the now spotted beeswax. She increased the heat under the cauldron to completely melt the beeswax and the ingredients slowly melted along. The concoction smelled somewhat earthy and metallic and looked quite unappealing. The cream currently had a light brown colour with green specks and streaks throughout. Once the mixture resembled a liquid like baby poo colour and consistency Zala turned the heat off. She carefully opened 2 aloe leaves and squeezed the gel out into the pot. The gel landed with a ‘plop plop’ sound and dissolved quickly forming a clear slightly green layer on top. She finely sliced a bunch of dittany leaves and added them last. Zala sniffed the pot and whilst the clear and sweet aloe fragrance was definitely there it was difficult to notice under the much stronger pungent smell of the blood. She ran to the ingredients table and looked through a number of small bottles. Zala jumped in relief as she found the peppermint oil and took it to her cauldron. The oil had a soothing effect on the skin as well and it would help massively with the smell. She opened the bottle and added multiple drops until the smell from the pot stopped being offensive to her. She stirred 4 times clockwise and watched the layers come together into a light green cream with dark green speckles. The cream smelt refreshing due to the added oil at the end. To finish the salve she tapped the cauldron twice and muttered an incantation. “Afairosana.”, Zala said decisively combining the words for removal and healing into one. She closed her eyes for a moment. Turning to the big clock she saw there was little more than 10 minutes left.

“This has to work...”, she grumbled and scraped all the ointment out of her cauldron and into a small jar. She walked to her volunteer and glared straight into his eyes. You better not talk and sit still they seemed to communicate. The boy gulped and nodded his head. Zala approached him and quickly dabbed some cream onto his scale-covered skin. Even before she finished rubbing the oily substance on every spot it began to work. The cream seemed to burn right through the scales and steam rose from his skin. Yet whilst this looked very painful it wasn’t so at all. The abundant aloe and peppermint cooled the skin down and the dittany quickly covered it in brand new skin. As the cream had been charmed to only remove the unnatural it stopped burning once the scales were gone. Zala let the Cleansing Cream do its job and she walked to her table to grab a clean cloth and wet it with cold water. With a few minutes left on the clock she handed the cloth to Steve and turned to the professors. “I finished curing my volunteer.”, she announced loudly to the student body who cheered and clapped enthusiastically. Steve cleaned his skin with the wet cloth whilst Zala bowed to the students and turned to her messy table. “Scourgify.”, she said and waved her wand at the table and equipment. Zala grinned to herself proud with what she had accomplished.

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Brandon Calder - Ilvermorny - Thunderbird The first task! Bran was both excited and nervous as he followed the three school leaders into the Great Hall. Then his eyes lit up at the sight of the table with potion ingredients and equipment. Please let it be something to do with potions so that I don’t make a total idiot out of myself, he prayed silently. He stood with his fellow champions, trying to focus on what was being said regarding the task and not the fact that he was being stared at by so many people.

As the task was explained, Bran nodded to himself. He had to do well in this task. He just had to. As his turn to go forward came, the youth stepped up and reached into Professor Fontaine's bag to choose his number. As he took out the paper, he saw the number 5 on it and heard Professor Fontaine announce it as though those watching couldn’t do a process of elimination based on the numbers already taken by the other champions.

Bran made his way over to the stool with his volunteer seated on it and bit his lip slightly. He had watched this particular girl as she had entered and seen the fact that her hair was growing with each step. In fact it had grown six inches in the short distance she’d walked to get to her seat. Bran was well used to girls and hair issues having a sister who loved changing the color of hers, but Lynnie used simple charms and this was a matter for potions, not spells to solve. As the girl took her seat and looked a bit helplessly at him, her hair fell over part of her face like a curtain over a window. It was then that Bran, who had moved closer, noticed the second challenge he had to deal with…his volunteer’s front teeth had enlarged to the point that they were protruding from her mouth. Bran sincerely hoped that they weren’t painful. He gave her a slight smile and said, “I’m going to do my best to counteract the potions you already have taken. Thanks for volunteering.” The girl gave a nod, as she couldn’t talk well with her teeth in their present condition. She brushed back her hair from her face, a remedy that lasted a minute at most. With a sigh, she gave up and sat there with the hair growing longer and longer.

What to do, what to do? Bran mused. A spell would be so simple to correct both things. That’s the point, Calder, he chided himself. This isn’t supposed to be simple. Now get your butt over to the table and turn your mind on. The clock’s ticking! Some of the other champions had already preformed their evaluations of their volunteers and were beginning on their counter-potions. As the son of a potioneer, he couldn’t fail in this task or his dad would disown him! Well, not really, he amended, but he’d never hear the end of it. The blue eyes surveyed the ingredients as his brain began to focus on possible solutions. Then as so often happened when he started working with potions, things began to fall into place and Bran was lost in his own word of brewing and creating just the right potion.

Deciding to tackle the hair issue first by creating a hair growth inhibiting potion, Bran gathered an assortment of largely well-known plants. Just as some of the first students at Ilvermorny who had been Native American used the natural herbs and plants they were used to, Bran used not only what he’d been taught in class but also the knowledge he’d learned from his explorations in order to concoct his potion. Raw papaya was the first and main ingredient. He mashed it until a pulp formed. Depositing the pulp in a cauldron, Bran cleaned his mortar and pestle and then crushed spearmint leaves to a fine, fragrant powder. After adding the spearmint to the papaya, the boy dropped fifteen drops of fireweed juice in, stirred the mixture six times clockwise and set it to warm with a quick flick of his wand. As the potion warmed, he cleaned the mortar and pestle again and readied bayberry leaves. When the potion was beginning to steam ever so slightly, Bran removed it from the heat, added the bayberry leaves, stirred three times counter-clockwise and then tossed in a handful of white willow bark. There was a slight popping sound and he smiled to himself. It was just what he’d wanted to hear at this stage in the process. Now to allow it to heat until it turned clear. Bran kept a close eye on the potion as it wouldn’t do to get the heat too hot and make the potion cloudy and have to start over. When it looked like water, the boy waved his wand over the cauldron, added a dash of chickpea flour, and stirred vigorously counter-clockwise for thirteen strokes. At the last stroke, he hastily took out the spoon, picked up his wand, flicked it, and a short spurt of white flame zapped the cauldron. The potion turned pale green and gave off a pleasant aroma. Smiling, Bran set it aside to cool for two minutes before pouring it into a bottle and taking it over to his volunteer.

“Here’s the first part,” he said quietly, showing the bottle of what appeared to be cream rinse for hair. The girl moved the curtain of hair aside and gave Bran a nod. She noted that he’d brought over a towel as well which he proceeded to tuck around her shoulders, under the waterfall of hair.

“Obviously you had a growth potion, so this is a growth inhibitor potion, specifically designed for hair. Papaya helps break down hair follicles and slows hair re-growth rate, actually killing hair cells before they can reproduce. Spearmint also slows hair growth by decreasing levels of androgens. Fireweed lessens hair re-growth by interfering with a body’s production of testosterone. White willow bark and bayberry leaves act as an astringent so that once the hair growth is slowed, the follicles will contract. The chickpea flour helps to thicken the potion so that it can be used as a rinse of sorts for the hair, while also helping to prevent re-growth.” As he explained, Bran was pouring a good dollop of the potion onto the girl’s head and massaging it into the scalp. He made sure to rub in the opposite direction from the way the hair grew.

“Smellths good,” the girl offered.

Bran smiled. “Yeah, potions don’t have to be foul smelling to work. We need to leave it in for fifteen minutes, then I’ll wipe it off with a fresh towel, and the problem should be gone.” He took a deep breath and said, “Now for those teeth.”

Returning to the table, Bran hastily got started on the next potion. Time was running out. He was glad that he’d used the two minutes wait time to clean up from the first potion and thus was ready to jump right in on the second. “I’m guessing an engorgement potion or another form of growth potion caused those teeth,” he mused to himself. “Now, how to best counter that?” Anti-engorgement potions…shrinking potions…restoration potions…all of these ideas flitted through his head until he decided on a reversal potion. Into a silver cauldron Bran poured two ounces of fresh lemon juice. After grinding four fairy wings, he added it to the cauldron and stirred slowly counter-clockwise while heating the mixture. It turned pale orange and when yellow steam began to rise, the young man added seven drops of coconut milk along with Flobberworm mucus to thicken it slightly. Leaving the concoction to simmer, Bran extracted the juice from three shrivelfigs. When the potion turned green, he added the juice and smiled as it almost instantly changed to pink. Removing the heat, he dropped a single uncrushed and unblemished rose petal into the cauldron. Immediately a lovely vanilla-like smell wafted up from the pink liquid. Bran chose a spoon made from cedar as any other type of wood would react badly and spoil the potion. He stirred, slowly and carefully, ten times clockwise. Removing the spoon, he set the potion to warm as he chopped a chorus fruit, a type of deep purple pear, into fine bits. Adding a handful of these, he increased the heat until the potion was boiling. The rich purple faded to light lavender and Bran nodded, gave a wave of his wand, and the potion was done. He blew out a breath and cleaned his area and equipment as the mixture cooled. When it was ready, he poured a bit of it into a round container, picked up a cotton swab-type instrument, and went over to present the finished produce to his volunteer.

“This potion is special not because of the individual ingredients, but because of the way in which they are added so that they intermingle with each other to form a thick liquid which can be smeared on your teeth. Some of the ingredients such as lemon juice, coconut milk and a rose petal also help mask the less pleasant smelling and tasting ingredients like Flobberworm mucus. All of the elements working together should reverse the previous potion and cause your teeth to shrink and be restored to their proper size.”

At the mention of Flobberworm mucus the girl shook her head and attempted to lisp out, “I thinth I vell justh stayth thisth way!”

“Come on, it’s not that bad, I promise,” Bran said. “And it’ll be a lot better to be back to normal, right?”

“Easthy for you to sayth!” the girl scowled, but she reluctantly allowed Bran to take a little swab and smear the mixture on her teeth. Crossing her eyes, she attempted to see if she could tell anything and then it became rather obvious that it had worked. “Hey!” she exclaimed. “They’re normal again!”She worked her mouth and smacked her lips slightly.

Bran handed her a handkerchief and said, “Wipe off the excess; don’t swallow it.”

The girl followed Bran’s directions and then gave him a smile…with pretty, normal sized teeth. “You were right; it wasn’t as horrible as it sounded. Thanks!”

“And now…” Bran took the fresh towel off his shoulder and wiped the pale green potion from her hair. Strands of hair came away with it and the girl gave a shriek.

“What did you do?! I’m going to be bald!”

“No, no…it’s alright,” Bran tried to reassure her. “Feel your head.”

Clapping her hands to her damp head, the girl frowned. Everything seemed to be alright. She tossed her hair back and immediately realization dawned on her. “Hey! It…it stopped growing!”

Bran smiled. “Yes, it did,” he assured her.

“Oh thank you!” she smiled.

“You’re welcome,” Bran smiled back. “And thanks again for being my volunteer.”

He stepped back and looked over at the other champions and gave them a smile. He’d made it through the first task!

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Aug 20, 2017 8 years ago Official
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Ok guys, this is closed up! I am traveling today so I won't be able to grade them today, but I will try my best to do so tomorrow!

Aug 24, 2017 8 years ago Official
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Hello champions! The results are in!

- you received the full 40 points! I loved that you did not go with the obvious potion choice for the nose. Good thinking!

- you received the full 40 points as well! I loved your reasoning for the ooze - I never would have thought to think of an allergic reaction!

- you received 39 points for this task. I had to take off a point as you had a few typos and a few punctuation errors. Lovely idea for burning off the scales though!

- you received 38 points for this task. You received 6 points for style instead of 8, as the formatting of your entry was a little bit difficult to follow. Not sure if this is just because of the spacing between paragraphs or if some of the lines were meant to be all part of the same paragraph. Please feel free to sMail me if you'd like to discuss. I really like your character's personality and voice though!

- you received the full 40 points! I love how you even took into consideration how your volunteer's speech would be altered by her ailment.

- you received the full 40 points! If I could give you more, I would!! I am totally in love with your writing style, and your ideas were lovely as well. I love that you silenced your victim volunteer! I legitimately laughed out loud.

Everyone did a wonderful job creativity wise, I am so proud of you!! I can't wait to see your entries for the next task.

Just a heads up, I decided that I was going to be super duper lenient on comma usage, since it is always a difficult convention to grasp and can be debatable. I will not harshly judge comma usage for the rest of the tasks either.

[edit]After some more consideration, Anne's score has been adjusted to 40.

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