I'm finally getting some of my pet profiles finished, and I'd like some feedback on their stories if anyone is interested in doing some reading~ I have three pets whose stories are finished, though of course just read whichever one(s) you're interested in! I don't expect anyone to read all of them lol. All three are fan pets, BUT I'd especially like feedback from people who aren't familiar with the fandoms, to be sure the stories still make sense. Also, I don't know what the max length is for a profile story, so are any of them too long? Here are the pets:

Drifblim - Pokemon fan pet, although the story is about an OC. It is FULL of balloons, lol. Never been in the queue before.

Agoraphobic - Twin Peaks fan pet (OMG THE REBOOT STARTS TONIGHT FLAILS), TW for suicide mention and mental illness. Got booted from the queue for low quality image (which has been removed/replaced, I think... they didn't say which image) and because the staff member said the formatting of the story made it hard to read, because originally it was just on the bottom of the page and not in a scrolling box. I don't know if the staff had actually read the story or not, but I edited it slightly anyway to try to make it easier to understand.

Al Cody - fan pet for the movie Inside Llewyn Davis. Got booted from the queue because the staff member didn't understand what the profile referred to, so I completely redid the story. Since this is a far more obscure fandom than the others, I'm the most concerned about this one making sense.

Thank you for any and all feedback and comments 🎈