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Dec 29, 2015 10 years ago
Yuzu
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Hi friends! ^_^

I'm looking for some feedback for my pets, Maika and Seren.

I have seen both pets become nominated for the Pet Spotlight and get rejected from the queue at least once so far. I am new to having pets get nominated for the Pet Spotlight and haven't won any trophies yet, so I'd like to get some feedback to see how I can improve them before they get nominated again. :)

Intentional things you should know about:

  • The "blank space" around the edges of the webpages are intentional; my goal is for their layouts to seamlessly fade out/blend into the surrounding webpage.
  • The scroll bars are covered up to add to the seamless appearance, and are marked with arrows.
  • The webpages are locked and should not scroll.
  • I enjoy minimalist designs, so they're not meant to be super fancy.

That being said, I am curious about how their profiles look on the screens of others. Are the scroll bars too hard to find? Is the layout too tall for your screen resolution, causing part of the layout to spill out of sight? Also, did you find any typos? Are the stories too short, perhaps? TCs are too small?

I am aware that some of the coding became weird after Subeta moved servers a while back, and I THINK I managed to get everything all fixed, but please let me know if I missed anything!

I'm all ears, and look forward to your suggestions! (Although it is likely unnecessary, I would still like to leave a friendly reminder here to be polite with your constructive criticism. Being blunt is fine, just try not to be mean about it. Thank you! :))

Yuzu | she/her | INFP-A | Lesbian | Big Sister | Gemini | Pokémon Trainer

Formerly known as Nima.

Dec 29, 2015 10 years ago
Annet
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Chelsea

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By maika I like the cloud background, but it will be more clear if there are some tiny blue spaces from the air in the white clouds, below the page.

The page From Seren looks good.

It's pity I can't scroll by both of them, because I love reading petstory's.

Dec 29, 2015 10 years ago
Yuzu
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I'll give that a try with Maika's profile, thanks. :D

You should still be able to read their stories; just because the page itself does not scroll doesn't mean the scroll boxes shouldn't work. Would it be helpful if I made the scroll boxes more obvious? Perhaps they blend in a little too much? All I've done to point them out is made arrows at the tops and bottoms of them, so maybe it would be helpful if I made them look more like scroll bars. Would be easy enough. :)

Yuzu | she/her | INFP-A | Lesbian | Big Sister | Gemini | Pokémon Trainer

Formerly known as Nima.

Dec 29, 2015 10 years ago
Annet
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Chelsea

Quote by Yuzu

Would it be helpful if I made the scroll boxes more obvious? Perhaps they blend in a little too much? All I&;ve done to point them out is made arrows at the tops and bottoms of them, so maybe it would be helpful if I made them look more like scroll bars. Would be easy enough.
Yeah I think so. :)

Edit: I'm not so handy to scroll without scrollboxes, but that can depand on me. ;) But I've read the story of Maika. It's adorable. ❤ I wonder how she made the rainbows.

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