Tassels review
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Anyone willing to give me a review/critique of my pet tassels? please? You need to click the numbers on the profile to get to the story.
Also any TC suggestions beyond what's in there would be appreciated.
Hello ! I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your pet Tassels' story. The artwork was really great and I liked the mouse-over change from one carousel horse image to the other. I think my only confusion between the artwork and story was whether or not the sad and worn horse transforms into a cleaner, happier version, or if it was two different horses, Tassels and Feather? I moused between the two and noticed the artwork was meant to be the same horse, but in your story (which I read before studying the images) I kept thinking it was depicting Feather.
After reading your awesome story, I think that time and Tassels' pole should be in her treasures somewhere. They almost seem like characters that take on a subtle life of their own.
Oh thank you for the suggestions! Hadn't considered the pole, but that should certainly be in there, along with time.
As for the artwork, there was going to be a part 3 (may yet add it in if I finish writing it in time) where she finds someone to clean them all up and reopen the park. But yes, they're meant to be the same (same saddles and posture, etc). I'll have to add that in somewhere to the story the cleaned version of Tassels.
i love the story and profile, although i'd suggest putting a background behind that section so the spotlight and minion tabs don't look quite so... floaty.
have you considered for the treasure? i know it's pretty pricey (at least, more than i'd like to spend on a tc item).
these would also fit with the carnival food you already have:
I just wanted to say that I still can't see the background image in both firefox and chrome^^" For some reason it only loaded after I looked for the url in the source code and opened that url in a new tab o_o
Thanks, and I'll get your suggestions into the TC as soon as I can. That pole is definitely expensive (and has been on my wl for ages for her xDDD, but alas). There should be a background, but as Athene said it seems to be playing up.
I rehosted the image on imgur. Does it show up now? Unless you think there might be a coding issue at play with that (I doubt, but you'd be the one to know).
ah ok the background is showing up now