Are They Ready?
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Aug 12, 2015
10 years ago
Quagsire
has been EXTERMINATED
Mallius
Hi there! Recently finished up Froseti (leashed) and wanted to make sure he was good to go. I will be reordering his TC somehow. Suggestions?
[Url=http://subeta.net/pets/juli-us] Juli-us [/URL] is also ready. Thoughts?
[Url=http://subeta.net/pets/Myvanwy] Myvanwy [/URL] is my first human being to be nominated, so is she ready??
Aug 12, 2015
10 years ago
Frenchi
is hopelessly romantic
Vivisect
ooh, they all look great! i did a couple of typos that you might want to fix, though.
in juli-us's story:
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original: His ears flicjked tot eh side at Duskmane’s bellow.
correction: His ears flicked to the side at Duskmane’s bellow.
correction: His ears flicked to the side at Duskmane’s bellow.
in myvanwy's story:
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original: She doesn&;t seem fazed by the crawlers who skittle past her
correction: She doesn&;t seem fazed by the crawlers who skitter past her
correction: She doesn&;t seem fazed by the crawlers who skitter past her
other than that, they all look perfect! as far as arranging froseti's TC, i'd suggest doing it in color order, to create a sort of gradient effect.
[flower=Frenchi]
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