Ok, so ive never written a pet story before, in fact i've never written any story before. I love writing, i started out writing poems when i was 13 and have been writing on and off for the past 11 years about various things, mostly rants and stuff about life and some poems along the way.

But actual stories are new to me.

So please let me know what you think! I'm pretty excited about it, i feel like it turned out great considering its my first ever actual story.

You can read it here

-Shaedi

Hello Shaedi! Yes, I think so too. Your story turned out great :) I got sucked into the whole scenery very fast. Your descriptions of the graveyard are just perfect to me. Detailed enough to imagine everything, but still focused on the important aspects and not too boring.

I was just wondering how Zandier was able to see himself in the dark after "waking up". I imagine him recognizing only his paws and then seeing himself in a shining marble tombstone or something like this. Otherwise is this himself telling the story, so of course he knows about his looks. I don't know. This was just an idea.

Oh, and maybe you could separate the little prologue and epilogue from the rest of the story told in the past. Maybe by bold letters or a different color to make clear that these parts don't belong to the told story.

I'd love to read more stories from you! Greetings and have a nice day, Kassy

Good idea on the separating the prologue/epilogue! i think i will work on this now! I also like the idea about how he saw himself, maybe i can work something like that in!