Hello! I've made a CW, and I'd like to know if it's good enough, before I open batches. ;u;

Do the lines and everything look okay? :'o

I love this, seriously.

Hey! The most appropriate area for requiring CW advice is the Discussions subforum on r200, especially these two topics, which are usually attended by experienced artists: one, two! Posts here can get easily overlooked since many/most people don't even check it so often unless Jessi (or someone) pings the official CW group for announcements :x

Good luck with your CW!

ping me when you release,I want :D

Aww, thank you so much! ;u;

I have the forum up here!

Only two slots left!

Oh! Thank you much, hon! I'll remember that!

The HA size version looks like the edges aren't clean, or something? I saw your board where people voiced concern over it not being accepted. The full size looks cute. I'm not an artist, though, so I'm not helpful with how to fix that, unfortunately.

Yeah, I'm honestly not sure how to make it not look... Not clean. The line is 1px... Perhaps it should be thicker? It's worth a look, at least. Thank you for your input!

Not sure if you're still looking for opinions, but it might help a little to change the color of the shading- instead of using gray, try dusky creams/pinks/purples. It will help your lines stand out from the shading around them. You might not be able to simply change the hue of the shading layers since gray was used, so try creating clipping layers and just playing around with colors until some look nice.

Here is kind of an idea of the colors I was talking about. Many of Subeta's official artists also add a highlight line on the inside a lot of their lineart. This also helps separate shading from lineart and can make certain details pop a little more.

I would also add more shading to the stomach.

For lineart size, I would actually try starting off with a size four brush between 70-80 opacity and smoothing it down with an eraser if you feel like it looks too thick. It should make your lineart smoother overall.

Hope that helps a little!