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Dec 16, 2014 11 years ago
boogleloo
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DeHavilland

After way too many years I have finally finished my pet Dehavilland. It took forever for me to figure out what I wanted to do with her and well I took WAY too much time writing the story. I totally procrastinate when it comes to my own stuff. The profile is completely styled using CSS, because I didn't have any artwork and I wanted to see if I could make a purely CSS profile look as if it was graphics.

So, if ya'll will take a moment to read the story and let me know what you think overall I would appreciate it! I'm looking forward to getting another Pet Spotlight under my belt. :)

(hope it's OK to ping ya'll), &

Dec 17, 2014 11 years ago
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Buttercream
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- Wait...so that is ALL coded?! No graphics?! Holy crap that is really cool.

My only critique is the first sentence font of all the paragraphs are a bit too small to read easily!

Dec 17, 2014 11 years ago
boogleloo
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DeHavilland

: Yep, that's all code. :D

I increased the font size on the first line is it better now?

Dec 17, 2014 11 years ago
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Buttercream
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- Much better!!

Dec 18, 2014 11 years ago
Masquerade
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Sigurd

she is just as awesome as I rmember he being last time I"m sure it was a year ago that I check her last

[font=Verdana] menagerie | ps support | style file | cw sale

If I have claimed a Dance from you and do not immediately Dance I will get back to you.

Always Buying:

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Dec 18, 2014 11 years ago
krazysuperkam
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Amazing profile! I love it! :) Just glancing through the story and it looks amazing! Though I spotted one typo on the second page, fifth paragraph:

"Wanting to keep out of site, I searched for a good place to stand in the back of the crowd..."

I think you meant 'sight' instead. :)

boop

Dec 19, 2014 11 years ago
boogleloo
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DeHavilland

: Cool, thanks again for the input!

: Thanks! HUGS

: Thanks for the catch on site/sight!

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