Laveena is who I am working on Glacier Torrent :)

I'm working on her layout, but i have the story posted on her page.

my game plan is to intertwine the stories of multiple pets into the "spirit realm battle" that will take place.

Suggestions?

Looks good so far. It could use a bit of formatting (new paragraphs and the like), but it looks like a good start. :)

You're doing something similar to me. Mine is a war between the elements too, hopefully to be spread between multiple pets (I already have most of them lined up). Though mine is between Light and Dark, with other elements being dragged unwillingly into the fray.

Will you take some advice on your planning process? Pick the pets you want involved, toy with their stories, and figure out an order as you write those stories. The Pet Friends section is an awesome way to link your pets together in the order you want your reader to follow the story. :D

oh great :D

thanks for the advice... I will definitely take the friends section into consideration

oh great :D

thanks for the advice... I will definitely take the friends section into consideration