For my boy Stanton.

His profile isn't anywhere near complete just yet...but see that little paragraph that's there at the moment? Can you give me some small feedback on how it reads? If you understand it all okay, grammar all good, and what not?

I think it's a very interesting subject you have down for him, and his view point of it! ^^ I really don't mind that it's small or unfinished, pretty much only my pet Mezol has permenant profile info at the moment. XD

Although it was a bit hard to read without having to highlight it, the grammar seems all correct.

Keep up with that intro. Do it. OuO/