I decided to create a story for my pet Bloody Alucard. So far I only have the intro. I wanted the story to point towards his character but don't describe him in detail. As english is not my mother tongue I'll be very grateful for corrections and suggestions. Here is the intro http://subeta.net/petinfo.php?petid=798090

and convinced himself that it was just for show

In the shelfs ... it's: on the shelves

Leaning on a bloodied wall and retrieving his breath he emitted a scream when - leaning against a bloodied wall and barely calming himself, he scream when.. -i think it sounds more natural this way,

It's head was.. its head

covered with blood.... covered in blood

omg, that's scary.. i would leave this story like this, but god luck with it ^^

changed it thank you very much =)

you're welcome ^^