Hello there. I haven't posted here in a while, but I'm trying to work my way back into Subeta, and I was hoping to start by getting some critiques on my pet Disgrace's story. She's been a WIP for a long time. The last section is rushed because it's almost 5 in the morning and I'm freaking tired. lol. I'll probably work on it some more later.

Anyone have any ideas for more TC items for her? Any help/suggestions you could give would be appreciated. Thank you.

Edit: wow. almost no interest after a day or two. i must really suck.

I'm not good at critiquing writing (and didn't notice anything wrong), but I really enjoyed her story.

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. c:

I think the story is really good c: Gotta admit, I'm usually a bit lazy and don't always read stories longer than about a page, but I found that story really interesting and read the whole thing xD TC? idk if any of the other emo bubbles would be useful?

Oooh, I love those suggestions, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. c:

i read the story. it wasn't bad. the mentality that she's a disgrace just because she went on her own course is a wee bit depressing, though. for the TC, i thought of these (for some reason):

[item=Dead Beats: From the Grave] [item=Ho Hum: The Wedding]

hope that helps a bit~

Yeah, I agree it's definitely sad! But I grew up in the Bible Belt and that's what it's like around here sometimes. :c I hope the mentality is different where you're from, 'cause it certainly needs to change around here. Thank you for reading even though you found it depressing.

And thank you very much for the TC suggestions, they're good ones I probably would never have thought of! c: The descriptions are great!

haha, it wasn't as if my mood was ~truly hurt by it or anything. i am actually from the south (florida) and currently it is where i have lived most of my life, so i related all too well to the backwards viewpoints. which is why i found it irksome, haha. i have also had to reside in a small town in arkansas which was even worse although it was only for a year. yet i'm in oregon now.. one of the reasons moving out west was that it was out of the bible belt. glad i could assist.