I haven't written anything for the general public in a while and I'm probably a little rusty. But! I want to open a commission shop, and I need examples.

So I'm willing to write your pet stories for the low low price of free! I just need need you to tell me a little about your pet's personality, what you want going on in the story, and any important details.

These will be probably only be a few paragraphs long, but I might do more if I'm feeling it or the story need to be longer in order to conclude.

You'll probably have to wait a few days before I finish, I'm sorry I write fairly slow. I'll try not to make anyone wait more thank four or five days, and if for any reason I can't finish your request I will contact you.

I'm going to take three slots. When all three are empty I'll take three more. This is NOT first come first serve! Post what you'd like and I'm going to do the ones the interest me most.

SLOTS

1. Vaan
2. Minty-Fivestar
3. Turokai

Ping to get my attention please. [sub]And for the record, my actual writing is a lot less awkward than my forum posts.[/sub]

Hi! I have a pet with no story, Problematique. He's related with the Bonfire and the Red Rreign, and mostly with wreathed items (as you can see in his treasure chest). I think he's a bit troublesome.

Are you interested? :D

Hello! I'm curious to see what you can come up with for one of my pets, Lycaon. :3

He's a Graveyard Keeto, and a recent addition, so he doesn't have much to him yet. He started as a regular Keeto, then I zapped him into Graveyard. So his story, I think, might go like this:

Lycaon is undead. He no longer remembers his life, save for bits and pieces in flashbacks or dreams from time to time. He is told he was a powerful warrior, but died in a battle. But he was brought back to life via a scientific experiment, in order to use him in battle once again. He obeyed for a time, but then decided to rebel and leave, to make his own mark on the world.

He's very quiet, sullen, and vicious in battle. In fact, from the scars he bears (he has muzzle scars over his snout, claw mark scars on his body, and perhaps some whip scars on his back in addition to the scars in his art), it's possible he was brutally conditioned in life to be a bloodthirsty fighter. He doesn't know for sure. But he has his own set of honor, and he does feel inclined to help those truly in need, even if he doesn't act particularly empathetic.

He's supposed to be kind of a scary, almost feral figure, ready to snap at the wrong word or action, but when you speak to him he's well-spoken, intelligent, and polite enough. He spends his days prowling alone, watching the world, and occasionally making himself known to those in need. He seems very curious about how others act, particularly in regards to emotion.

Perhaps the story could be about him meeting someone (doesn't really matter who), maybe even having Lycaon save the person from some monster or attacker. Then having that person observe Lycaon. Perhaps they ask some questions, obviously terrified of him, but Lycaon is willing to answer them. I'm not particularly picky about where you'd like to take the story, but I'd like the highlight to be describing his behavior and features, as well as giving a very tense and fearful tone. He is a dangerous pet, and only his intelligence and streak of empathy keeps that in check. But if you have another idea for what to do with the story, I don't mind. ^^

I hope that's enough to work off of... but if not, you can ping/comment/sMail me for more discussion. But I am mostly curious to see what you come up with. ^^

Whether you are interested or not, thank you for the opportunity! :)

Ohh ohh! My Hydrus pherret, (The Dread Pirate)-Polochon.
I can't write well enough to do his story justice. He and his sister Raseyna were twins, the only children of a pair of common pherrets. During a sea voyage to the sacred Isles the ship they were on was wrecked. Merena was impressed by the tiny pup who tried to fight her to protect his twin sister. She promised to bring Rasena safely to shore if Polochon would agree to be her servant. Polochon agreed, and Merena kept her promise, unfortunately she never promised to let their parents, or anyone else aboard the ship, live.
Now Polochon is a bitter and vicious pirate, sinking ships and taking no prisioners. He is Merena's loyal servant, but he hates her, in fact he hates everyone.

I can do that! For sure. I got your item as well doll, thank you!

-Fivestar Yep I can do that for you. If I need anything I'll let you know!

I might need more information than that, but I'll see what I can do.

and @ all of you! I'm so sorry for not getting back to you! I've been sick, and honestly I could have sworn I already replied. I mean I remember writing back to all of you, but maybe that was the fever talking! But I have not forgotten about this thread goodness. I'm so sorry for making you wait. I'll start on all these today.

You're so very welcome. Hope you feel better! :)

I'll try to give you a little more details. I just wanted to know if you were interested or not.

When Problematique was young, he tried to help de Red Rreign thawning the fields, but he didn't control his power, so on one of his fire breaths, burnt lots of trees and vines. People expelled him from the town, and now he's afraid of fire, even he needs it to survive.

Need more information?

Hope you feel better too!

That should be good doll, I can work with that. If I need anything else, I'll let you know!

-FIVESTAR Edit because I was the last poster. You aren't forgotten guys! I've just suddenly (somehow) gotten really busy irl. I hope to start your stories in the next few days and have them finished sometime next week. I'm totally rethinking opening a shop too because whoa as soon as I take on any work I end up swamped irl.

And I know what you mean. As soon as I offer to do art requests or promise I'll update a story, something happens to stop me. x)

Will there be any slots open soon? :C

Let me know what you're looking for and I'll see about squeezing you in this batch. It might be a little while before I finish them though I'm sorta swamped irl. If you're okay waiting until mid/late next week though, I'm fine with at least attempting to do what you want;.

-FIVESTAR I can't finish these right now due to personal issues. I can't work on much of anything. I apologize. If you sent me bribes or anything just s-mail me and I'll either send them back.

(Liking the new name) Take care of yourself, and don't worry about the "Bribe". Consider it an early Lumenaire gift :D Hope the personal issues resolve themselves OK for you.

don't worry! First concentrate in your own life, and then, when you feel better, you can write ithe stories ^^

Don't worry a bit. I completely understand and hope all will work out and be well for you! ^^

Hi ^-^ would you like to try give a story for my Ecco the Dolphin?