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hiya there, i'm harley. since my tablet not working properly, i am unable to take any commissions, and since i'm bored out of my mind, i thought i'd take writing commissions. but i do need some examples first, and i've been running low on inspiration, so throw your ideas at me and i'll give them a go! (please ignore my lack of capitalization, i promise you i can bring out the literacy when needed! x] ) i really have no preferred genre or anything, so i'll do pretty much anything!
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What you want- (pretty much the basic gist of what you want me to write! the more details the better. doesn't necessarily have to be a pet story.)
Anything extra- (any extra details you want to include, such as point of view you want written in, etc etc etc. as aforementioned, the more details the better!!)
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i'm not super busy(in fact i have more time on my hands than i need), but i will take three slots at a time so that i have enough time to assure that each piece is up to par. [:
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...yeah, that's pretty much it! if you have any questions, please feel free to ask! c: hope to hear from you soon!
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Username- France What you want- I'd love a story for Rejected. please :) he's a stuffed toy. He'd onced belonged to a very caring young girl, but she accidentally left him out in the rain. when he was found by the owner of a toy shop, he was sewed up and they tried to fix the damage done by the rain, but he looked horrible. Still, the owner tried to sell him. He watched all thetoys come and go, but he was never ever chosen. Anything extra- (any extra details you want to include, such as point of view you want written in, etc etc etc. as aforementioned, the more details the better!!) I'd like to start off with him sitting on a shelf in a dusty room, wishing he was bought. And then the flashbacks of when he had an owner, when he was found... Etc
Could i snag a spot by chance?
Omg, this is such a life saver! Iv been so stuck writing a story for this one pet, if you could lend me a hand and write her back story, id be thrilled to pieces and can send a tip!
What you want- My pet Lorain is a war horse, set in a nondescript, ideally Subeta themed medieval period and I need a story about her life as a war horse. My idea had been that she had originally been a do-nothing kind of horse living outside a village and enjoying life, but was swept up in to war, and through this war she has no idea about discovers she's actually very good at her job and very attached to her rider(named Malory with no set physical description yet), and eventually becomes very decorated as her rider gains recognition. Ideally the story should be totally from her perspective, she doesn't understand human speech any more then a normal horse would, and she has no concept about what is going on in the war, only that there is a war, and what she maybe can learn from other horses. The ending of the story id like to see as her as an old horse in the same pasture as where her story started, if you can manage it!
Anything extra- I want the story to include a lot of her thoughts and inner narrative really, the rest are just rough ideas iv been working with, so third person limited omniscient would be a good perspective? Her personality is sweet and well tempered, but fierce at times, and courageous in terms of protecting her rider. Malory himself is pretty confident, and some what oblivious to Lorain's role in his victories, but affectionate towards her all the same. I hope non of this is too detailed by the way, feel free to take artistic liberty with any of this as long as the general idea and theme remain!
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alright, thank you!! will get started on your stories :]
yep of course! what would you like?
here my idea
What you want- Just need short story for Mystery. He used to real person with a family. He was farmer. Say he lived around medieval period. One day his village was attacked and he was stabbed. Thinking he was going die in his wife arms he soon woke up in a lab like room. He had no feeling at all and found himself with wizard named wicked who trapped his soul in a steel body. Now he is this man slave. He tends to his shop and prepare things for his spells.
Anything extra- if anything he really loved his wife. He also very smart for a farmer and keep a journal night wrights everything goes on inside it. He has no feeling now as a steel robot pretty much.
okay, got it! i will contact you if i have any questions along the way (:
i finished your story! please let me know if you want anything added or changed! (i know it's a little long, so just let me know if you want me to shorten it and i'll try to take some unnecessary things out!)
rejected.
The old woman's eyes lifted behind the slim rims of her glasses, the bell above the door jingling. A pair of small boots squeaked as a young girl stumbled into the shop, her mother close behind. The girl's eyes wandered the store, marveling at all of the toys on the shelves. The mother gave a smile to the elderly woman behind the cash register, stepping into the store with her daughter's hand in hers. Their hair was soaked and their coats were slick with water; the rain was coming down in sheets now.
With an approving nod from her mother, the girl released her mother's hand, walking about the store, lost in the world of toys. A grin crept onto her face as she pulled an old, worn down Kumos plush off of a shelf. Although there were obvious attempts to repair the toy, it was still terribly stained, the material blotched. Still, the girl hugged the plush close to her chest. "Momma, it kinda looks like Mr. Fluffy!" She ran up to her mother, who was chatting with the woman behind the counter and the toymaker, who had finally decided to take a break from his work. The silly grin was still stuck to the girl's face. However, her mother frowned, pulling the toy out of her arms.
The girl's grin faded immediately as her mother placed the old Kumos back on the shelf. "Honey, this one is old and stained. Here, what about this one?" Searching the shelves, the woman pulled another Kumos from one of the shelves, placing it in her daughter's arms. The material was clean and soft, the stitches were meticulous and the eyes weren't chipped. The girl's smile came back right away, rushing to the counter, leaving the old Kumos on the shelf where he had been sitting, waiting…
***
The girl sat in the grass beneath an old oak tree. The wind blew, rustling the leaves and her black hair. She sat in the center of a circle of toys - small plastic Legeicas, tea cups, hairbrushes. But none of the toys were as important as the plush Kumos that she clutched in her arms.
Sighing, she set him down in the grass, lying on her belly. "You're getting dirty," the girl muttered, quickly sitting up. "That's okay! I'll clean you up real good," Beaming, she grasped the hairbrush, roughly running it through his fake fur. "There you go, you're all clean now." Sitting him up in her lap, she smiled down at him. "You're my best friend," With that, she scooped him up once again. Stroking his soft fur, she cuddled the toy up to her face. She had been so caught up in her imaginary world that she hadn't noticed the back door open, a tired, dark-haired woman stepping out.
"Annie," the woman called out. The girl's eyes snapped to her, frowning. She hugged the toys close to her. The woman shook her head. "Annie, put your shoes on and brush your hair. We need to make a run to the grocery store." She then lifted her eyes up to the gray sky. The air was heavy with the scent of rain. "And hurry, too. I don't want to get caught in the rain."
"Okay, Mum," The girl sighed, complying. Slipping on her shoes, she grabbed her Kumos by the tail, rushing to her mother.
By the time Annie and her mother had finished their shopping, the rain was coming down relentlessly; cars raced by, sending water splattering onto the cars behind them, and the sidewalks were almost flooded. The woman bit her lip, grasping Annie's hand. She watched the scene from behind the store's glass windows. "Come on, now, maybe we can make it to the car if we hurry." The girl glanced up at her, her arms full of plastic shopping bags and the Kumos. She nodded. With that, they rushed out of the store, their shoes sloshing in the rain. Annie hadn't even noticed that her toy slipped out of her arms, falling into the wet concrete.
***
When the old toy shopkeeper found the Kumos after he sat in the rain puddles for who knows how long , he made his best attempts to repair him, but to no avail. Although he had replaced his worn, chipped beady eyes, and redid his fraying stitches, he was unable to fix the damage from the rain.
Still, he decided to put him on the shelf anyway. Maybe a little boy or girl would take him eventually.
But they never did.
So there that old Kumos sat, for hours, days, months, maybe even years, waiting for one of the many customers to take him off the shelf and bring him home, like they did with all the others. He waited, waited…
But they rejected him, because he wasn't like all the others. He wasn't new and perfect, like all the others. All he was… was rejected. And that's all he would ever be.
Rejected.
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Username- JodieGermanotta What you want- could i have a story for my pet StefaniGermanotta. I have written a basic version of her story on her profile but i would love it if you could make it more exciting and a bit longer. I don't mind what you add as long as you can keep to the basic story. I am also fine with you just totally re-writing the whole story again, but again, keeping to the storyline. Anything extra- could you try not to humanize her if possible as i already have pet art that i would like to keep on the profile.
Thank you :)
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alright, i slotted you! however i'm a little confused; is she a human or a subeta pet? or is she just a subeta pet that goes to school...? haha sorry, the teeth part confused me a little bit.
she's a subeta pet that went to school, sorry i was first basing it on a human but decided that i would rather her be a pet. Sorry for the confusion :S
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hey letting you know take me off the list Don't got to now. I got enough free time were wright it myself! thanks for putting on the list worry if i waste any of your time.
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Its perfecttt can I just say how perf it iZz
Ahhh thank you soo much
can we claim slots? if so id like to claim the open slot? 8D;
Username- Serene What you want- I have a pet who is named after, Virelai the music shop owner on subeta ^_^ it would be awesome if you wrote something about how he found work or owns a music shop? I believe hes a violinist as well so maybe you can write about his passion for music? just some ideas c: Anything extra- you can have freedom on this, im very lenient about it xD
oh gosh i'm so glad you like it!! <3
alright, i added you c:
are you still doing these?
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