Coke's Writing Commissions {OPEN}

@ France I've been having a real difficult time writing a story for Lilani. I've got the idea down, but getting a story written just isn't working. I love your writing style, and I'd like to know if you're willing to take a bash at it.

Pet: Lilani Species: Velosotor Gender: Female Summary: When the head of the Light agency resigned, he was replaced by a mad extremist known only as The Inquisitor. It was then that the balance of power was shattered, and the Dark; once friends, neighbors and partners; were persecuted, beaten down and driven out of their homes. Tired of it, the Dark lashed back and now war rages between the two. Other Elements are either dragged into war or driven into exile. Lilani is a Water mage, driven from her peaceful life by the sea into the Shadowglen forest, pursued by Light agents bent on either breaking her spirit and putting her into slavery for the Light side, or else torturing her to death and using her corpse as an example of what happens to those who defy the Light.

It is during her flight that she encounters the terrible Nerrow. With deadly precision, he turns her pursuers into sprays of blood upon the foliage, then sucks their souls into orbs. Expecting to go the way of the former Light agents, she is surprised when he declares her "Innocent" of violent crime and takes her to the sanctuary... a mysterious glen in the heart of the Shadowglen forest. A new group has gathered here, ruled by Terentia: an Irion who was once in an Agent of Balance. War has begun. The tides are turning. And the Revolution is in full swing. The opportunity is offered. Will the Water Mage help restore peace?

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