So, most of the info is in my signature, and I was wondering if anyone had some suggestions on how to better the whole concept, or advertise it better?

Maybe you could be more clear in the page about what happens after giving the paintings to the orphanage? You say "Two paintings depicting a camera, will teach about the painting techniques, and about photography," so does this mean that you are going to give the paintings and then go in and give a class about photography? I dunno, the concept sounds well intentioned but I feel like little girls would have more fun actually painting, and perhaps that's what you mean to do but it's not quite coming across in the fundraiser page.

Also, I'm confused as to what you are fundraising for, do you need money to buy supplies? What's your current connection to the orphanage?

Thank you so much, I will make the changes you suggest, and then will it be alright if I ask you to take a look at it again?

No problem! Feel free to ping me again after you update it.

Hey there, I was wondering if you'd mind having a look at another project of mine?

Build a Library for an Orphanage

This project sounds like a great idea, and it's very well explained