Critique my character
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I've never really role-played before but I have put much thought into it, and I think I have finally created a character I am happy with and I just wanted to see if people thought she was to Mary-Sueish. . .
Name: Abel Alessandra Atar Aka: Abel or Aless Height:5'7 Weight: between 130-140 Personality: Abel is quiet and very logical. Depending on her mood she can be very optimistic or pessimestic. She does tend to be a loner mostly because of bullying when she was young. She trys not to get intimate or attached to anyone or anything in fear of getting hurt or hurting them. Apperance: (my HA) She has dark brown hair that falls halfway down her back, and not-so-appealing pale skin.She has pale blue eyes just like her mother. She is mostly average in weight and height but trys not to show it. She usually wears knee-length skirts and long sleeves that dont cling to her body much. She always wears the head-phones around her neck but they arn't attached to an i-pod or mp3 player. The end of the cord is usually tucked into the top of her skirts. History: Abel learned at a young age she could do powerful things with her mind. It began at age two when her parents found her levatating her crib and giggling happily. But she soon found the worst of her powers at the age of four. After being spanked by one of the nannies for missbehaving she set the house a-blaze in a fit of rage and fear. From that day forth her father desised her exsistance and her mother feared her as if she were death itself. But that was still not the end of the fire. Soon after she was sent to a exclusive boarding school. There she was bullied and excilled to a breaking point. In the middle of the night the school caught fire. None died but a lot were seriously enjuried. To this day Abel still struggles with the enternal fire in hopes that one day she will learn to balance it.
