Just finished my first go at writing down the premise for my Bloodred Sheeta pet, Hennarose.

You can find her here or through my profile: .ws .net

I was afraid that she would come off as a Mary Sue or as flat to others despite how her concept interests me, as I intend to convey it. I haven't really spent much time on the particular little details, like height and such. She'll eventually have full details for her quad, anthro and human form. So, what do you think? Any parts that sound like they need especial fleshing out before they're coherent and flow properly? Feedback on the concept itself or the character herself is much appreciated.

You say much about 'ambition' but never really say was she aspires to do. Before, what did she want to do? And now, does she wish to strike back, or merely be stronger in a in-your-face attitude?