So, I love to role play, and made my two main characters. But I think they need . . . A lot of adjusting, and working on. So, if someone would be so kind enough (or a few people) to give me some advice and help, I would be so thankful to you! Please, only encouraging comments, not 'Your character sucks like hx!! you should quit role playing for life because you suck to!'. None of those comments please. And thanks.

NOTE: ((Also, these characters are Vampire for a Vampire role play. But I tend to use them for others, and just adjust some of the info slightly so they are not vampire, and can work with other role plays. Thanks. ))

Name: Yuki Arius Haze Age: 17 Gender: Female Race: Pureblood Vampire Orientation: Straight Status: Single Appearance: -hair: Black with a scarlet/crimson hint of red shine, lower back length -eyes: Black/hint of crimson -skin: Dull pale -Height: 5'8" -weight: 144 lbs -clothing: -school uniform/whatever feels like putting on Piercings: None Markings: Special red markings on upper body

Yuki can be very stubborn at times, especially when it comes to her brother. She would never abandon her brother, or her friends, and is very loyal. She keeps many secrets to herself, and can by very kept to herself until she knows people. She is quit attached to her brother. Yuki exceeds in weaponry, and is very fond of her 'toys'. Her personality does tend to change a lot though, depending in the mood she may be in. Yuki is a very intelligent girl.

Name: Rye Tundra Haze Age: 19 Gender: Male Race: Pureblood Vampire Orientation: Straight Status: Single Appearence: -hair: Short slightly messy dark dark gray, just about black with tint of red -eyes: Light golden -skin: -Dull pale -Height: 5'10" -Weight: 178 lbs -clothing: School uniform, to formal/dress type Piercing: None. Markings: Special red marks on upper body

Rye is incredibly overprotective of his sister, and would do anything for her. He rarely likes anyone around her, let alone to talk to her. He is determined. When Rye sets his mind on something he doesn't stop until it is achieved. Is a very wise and bright student. He excels in the drawing/arts area, and is /trying/ to excel in weaponry as Yuki.

Alright, thanks for the comment. ^^ I'll go check it out.

And yep, that's their names. Nothing wrong with having different names every once in a while. ^_^

Awesome, just read it all. Have to change/edit/work with quit a few things on here. Thanks for telling me to go read it. I shall work on it! Lolz. (I do like the names though, so not really changing that. =] ))