I drew it last week and didn't have time to do the rest so I finished it this afternoon. Please give some comments, critiques, and constructive criticism. Thanks!

Here Is The Picture!

Ah! This is a really good one for your first piece. :) Let's see... well, I would like to see it shaded but I think it's fine as it is (x

well, with any form of art, don't be afraid to play around and really go in depth with shading, don't be afraid of dark darks or bright whites!

also, weighted lines (for lineart) are always good too. Weighted lines are like..applying different thicknesses or pressers to the line, so it's not uniform without.

Wow!can u make me one?