My attempt at some traditional sketch

Feel free to comment, give tips, redline. :)

I'm looking for any help in the following areas: -anatomy -proportion -how do you sketch?

like. how do you sketch out the characters? >> and yes. this is in pen. i will do serious drawings in pencil, but i felt like using a pen at the moment. x.x i want to improve my sketches before i can go on to lineart and coloring and such. -nod-

thanks :D