Will you guys critique my pokemon trainer? I'm still working on a last name, by the way.

Name: Natalie Age: 16 Gender: Female Occupation: Trainer Pokemon: Jazz the male Charizard, Classic the male Scyther, Tap the female Houndour, Drum the male Luxray, Rhythm the Abra, and Note the Rhydon. Appearance: Long dark brown hair that reaches down to the middle of her back, that falls in bangs against her face. Skin is smooth and pale, with small freckles dotting her face, starting in the middle of her left cheek, across her nose, and half way onto her right cheek. Eyes are deep blue, a dark, intense color, with large pupils. Her eyes are round, wide. Tall, lithe, skinny figure. Stands at around 5'3, only a few inches taller than her twin sister. Legs are long and her torso is short. Hands and feet are small, average size, while her finger nails are painted a shiny black color with white tips. Fingernails are long. Wears lighter denim shorts with a hole just above the right knee, the ends are rolled up. Shoes are black, thin, dressy gym shoes with rainbow laces. Normal shirt is a deep blue tank top with a light black sweater over it when cold. Personality: Usually the more out-going of the two twins, Natalie isn't exactly the kind of girl that you would find hiking or anything, but she isn't the kind of girl that you wouldn't find shopping all day either. She's more of a mix, she likes the outdoors fair enough, but she hates to stay out too long. She feels that she gets too dirty when she stays out for too long, that's why she hates to stay out too long. She likes to shop, but doesn't like to shop too much either. Natalie doesn't like to shop, for she believes that she is fine with what she has and doesn't need anything else. She feels that she doesn't get along with other people who are crazy about the latest fashions or clothing. Though you wouldn't see that through her pokemon. Natalie has tough pokemon, who love the outdoors. Which is weird considering the fact that she doesn't like it too much. She caught all of her pokemon by herself, in the forest just outside of the town that she grew up in. Likes the tough pokemon because she wants to show the world that she isn't just any normal girl who likes shopping or something like that. Though she'll walk around town with at least one of them out to show that she doesn't exactly like the forest either. Natalie absolutely loves music. She loves to tap rhythms and sing. She just loves music and has tried to play almost every instrument, succeeding in some and failing in others. No one really knows how she became so fascinated with music. She loves the way that it can express emotions and even change other people's emotions if they really listen to it and understand the lyrics as well as the composer wants them too. Likes hip-hop type of music, thinks country is okay but absolutely hates classical. She'll listen to it if someone really wants her too, but she will not have a good time at all while listening to it. Natalie is also the kind of girl that you would find reading. Though she doesn't read all of the time, she likes to read about different adventures that people write about, preferring fiction to non-fiction. Likes to read because she thinks that she can enter a different world where she would want to be in, and sometimes even writes her own short stories. Though they never come out very well, she doesn't have the world's best writing or grammar skills. Lacks spelling skills also, lets her sister take those abilities and her sister leaves the other, artistic abilities to her. Likes to draw and paint pictures, but they don't come out as well either, for she can never seem to stick with one idea, she always jumps around to different ideas until she has over ten, when she gives up on all of them and starts over on a new idea that is usually better than the ten before them. History: Natalie was born on May Fifth, along with her twin sister, Violet. Her parents, Melissa and Theodore Summers, were both pokemon haters. They didn't like the creatures at all, thinking them to be creatures of darkness that would one day kill them all and take over the world. Natalie, however, along with her sister Violet, knew that they were wonderful creatures. At the age of thirteen, she faked her own death(drowning in a sea), and escaped her family. Her family members had no reason to suspect that she had faked the death, for they believed that her body had been lost at sea. So her parents thought that water pokemon had dragged their daughter to her death. After that, they kept her twin sister away from every pokemon, shunning her from the reality that they lived in. At the age of fourteen Natalie rescued her sister from her parents' cold, pokemon-hating grasp and together they started their journey a little early. In the first few months of being free, Natalie got her first pokemon, a Charmander whom she named Jazz, and trained to be her lead pokemon. She then caught Classic, her Scyther, with the help of her twin sister. Note the Rhydon came next, she fought hard against him with both of her pokemon. Next came Tap, then Drum, and then Rhythm, whom she captured only a few months ago. Other: -