His cool breath on my face His blue eyes, gazing into mine He leans in closer Oh my God, what are we doing? Following my instincts, I lean in closer Now I can taste his breath on my tongue Our faces are just inches apart now Oh my God, I'm scared He leans in so close Our lips touch, just a peck We go back, more intense this time I love this... He pulls back I can feel the blood rushing to my cheeks, blushing It's over He gets up, and leaves Its the end What a great end to have

I don't know where this came from, but it was fun to write. Good, no?

hahaha i actually really liked it.. very true to how it really is i think. reminds me of my first kiss.......

It's a personal subject, but it just doesn't seem... personal enough. The last line doesn't fit the serious air of it, either.

And, if you really want to use ''Oh my God'' more than once, add it in somewhere towards the end -- otherwise, to me, it seems as though it was unintentional. (Unless, of course, it was; in which case, remove it.)

/Finicky.