Would anyone join this roleplay? If not, please tell me why or at least help me make it better.

Saint Dane was defeated long ago by Robert(Bobby) Pendragon and his fellow travelers. Since then things have returned to normal. Halla is safe, at least, they think it is. Nearly 100 years after Bobby and his friends save Halla, a new threat appears. A new threat appears from Solara. Saint Dane had a younger brother that many spirits knew about and that few suspected would follow in his brother's footsteps. Now he has begun his rise to power. There is a new group of travelers, descendants of the last group that have been sent to Earth to stop him. They were each given the traveler ring as a family "heirloom" never being told what they truly were. But, it's now time for them to take up their places as travelers and band together to stop the man who wants nothing more than to destroy the whole of Halla. Will they succeed? Who knows, but if they don't Halla will be no more.