It's a short poem, but it was good enough for a contest. [Won 3rd place] Do you think you all can rate it 1-10? I'd like to know how good it is for you guys.

The Grand Canyon

Miles and Miles of air, Mixed with dust and dirt. Pushing the staggering rocks, Down, Down, Back to the earth. Leaving giant craters, For scientists to use. Or maybe a tourist attraction. Who knows? I’d love to visit this wonderful place. Pack up my things. Boy, I can’t wait! Let the travel begin, At a slow, easy pace.