I'm writing this for here.

Any suggestions? I loved writing, but life got in the way so my skills are a bit rusty. :P

Clickie

[edit] Screwed up the URL.

I'm... not seeing it? All I get is a deviant account, and I don't see any written articles. Of course, I'm rather ignorant when it comes to DA, and I could be missing it. ^_^;

Fixied. For some reason, it was going to someone else's. ^_^

Heh. ^_^ Well, anywho, I thought it was very interesting and intriguing. At first I thought it was going to be like a Yugioh fanfic with the whole alternate personality thing and wasn't very interesting (I've read enough of those), but then I realized they were a subeta pet and nothing like that, so I reread it with a lot of interest. I really liked Haru's personality, especially towards the end.

A few things:

And the next sentence,

The shopping scene seemed to be a little awkward, but the further into the story you went, the better it got.

I am VERY bad at beginnings. I'll have to improve that part.

Thanks for the grammatical fixes as well. :) It helps a lot.