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Jul 3, 2009 16 years ago
PAROXYSM
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i know it's stylized, but i would still like some crits on the anatomy + other thoughts!

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Jul 3, 2009 16 years ago
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i always always love your art paro~ my only criticism is that the neck is a little long? looks odd. other then that, fantastic ❤️

Jul 3, 2009 16 years ago
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It looks very much a spin off of a the fashion illustration style. :3 I like it a lot. Cause fashion style has it's own little anatomy rule book I don't think I have really much to crit. The only thing I could suggest is another fold to show her chest better. (unless she's flat chested, in which then you're fine xD)

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Jul 3, 2009 16 years ago
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I think it looks really nice! I don't see how I can critique, it looks fine to me, so wonderful job! =D

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Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
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thank you guys! ❤️

oman, that fashion anatomy rule book needs to exist, so i can buy it ASAP.

yeah, i was having the hardest time with the boobs area, in regards to how much boobies should be seen underneath the arms! i entirely forgot about adding in a fold there, let's just say she's an a-cup ahahaha?

Jul 4, 2009 16 years ago
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Haha not to sound like a creep but boobs are fun to draw. l''D

But usually from my experience you don't see too much to the side like under her arms unless she's like super DDDDDD. Yeah. Depending on what she's wearing you can pull them off the best by the way a the fabric folds below it or the form of a tight fitting bodice or whatever.

I don't know a lot a lot about fashion anatomy but I do know they elongate the figure quite a bit to make the clothes look more appealing.

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