Hi! I just finished writing Kinan's back story, which can be found here. I'd really like to get people's opinions and any suggestions. Thanks!

I liked the story. I thought it was really well written

Aw, thanks ^_^! I wasn't sure about the pacing of it, so I was worried about that.

I enjoyed it. ^_^ I agree, it was very well written. 10/10

If you have the time, mine rating Avertia's? x)

Subeta..ate my post o.O

Thank you, and I LOVED yours! A 10 for sure. I've always had a nagging fear that some day, something like that will happen.

Ohhh, I thought it was lovely, Peresphone. O3O And I think the pacing is fine; I love the details... Also, you can write action a lot better then I can, too. xD

I really like it. ^^ Definitely very well-written. The only problem I have is that I don't like second person point of view, but it's just a personal thing, so ignore it. XD;

Thank you both :D! And I'm sure you write wonderfully, Nighttide :).

I first started off in third person, but then I thought it felt strange to have it from a character's point of view when it wasn't the character whom I was writing about... does that make any sense?

Yes, it does. I totally see your point, you can disregard what I said. It really is a great story. ^^

Oh nono, it wasn't that, I was just wondering if there was an easier way I could have done it. Normally I write in third-person past tense. ^_^