Ok, so I'm the artist and editor of a webcomic me and friend from my old college (Columbia College, I had to leave due to the economy screwing my mother, but I plan to return) are working on. It's a fantasy/sci-fi/steampunk/we have no idea thing, we're just making the genre up as we go along. He's writing, and he's good, so hopefully my art will matchup.
Anyway, I went through a few different versions of the ship, and we finally settled on one, and i did the modifications it needed (a more forward set helm, wings pointing a tad downward, and some other stuff.) And I was hoping to get some opinions on it that didn't come from the wife, my mother, or the writer.

The smoke is actually steam. And the cog will look better when I finish painting this beast.