I was wondering if someone would be willing to critique my college essay? Be as blunt as possible

If you're interested, please let me know and I'll sMail you the essay.

Sorry for not posting it here. I just don't want it to be stolen.

Thanks in advance!

What is the topic?

I was in my high school's writing center, and I've always received As on my college essays.

How much time do you have to edit, ? Like, would completely reworking it be an option, worst-case scenario?

Either way, go ahead and sMail it to me. c:

I would love to read it, if that's okay? ^^

- The topic is how has a past event affected your life. At least, that's loosely what the topic is.

and - Thanks so much for looking at it! I'm sending it to you now :)

, you can sMail me your essay if you want. ^^ (My professor says I write the best essays in class. ^^)

Thanks so much ! I'll send it to you now :)