I ended up finishing the piece this afternoon but critique is nice, anyway. Just general critique.
Some artwork is here. I... honestly don't draw a lot because I find it frustrating and have to be in the right mood to do it, but I'd still like to improve, so critique away.

I hate you.
Cause your art is awesome. Dx
The most I can say is, work on more poses/expressions? But the same goes for me. :P