I was just wondering if anyone could just spare a bit of time to go over a few stories and offer their thoughts. Preferably over sMail or comments.

It's all subeta related as their for my pets but they for the most part are right at pg-13 going by this guide.

I haven't had anyone to do a little back and forth with over my writing and it's been long enough I could use some outside opinions.

what sort of critiques are you after? i'd be interested in seeing them.

I'm interested, unless you're already working with Pig ^^

Sounds intresting.