I've been working on this lineless picture for around a month now. Though, I still think there is something wrong with it. They colors just aren't popping like they usually do on my other drawings.

Anyway, help? Any kind of critique/comment, I'll take it!

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I think that you need a darker color in there somewhere; right now, you've got two medium-toned, saturated colors, plus white. Something significantly darker and cooler would help contrast those colors, giving it that so-called "pop." (:

Why thank you. c:

I may darken the skin a bit so it stands out more. That may help.

Thanks again!

It needs some shading to make it pop. I'd suggest a nice light purple or blue tone to really make it pop.

A purple or blue? Wouldn't that just kinda stand out in the picture?

What everyone else said; if 'pop' is what you want, you need some more darks. More dark shading in the hair will be much more effective in making it look glossy, too.

It's what I usually use, and yes, it will stand out, but in a nice way. Don't use anything too dark at first, just very light in the areas you want heavy shadow.

Alright, I think I'll try that.

Thank you so much. c: