I am not much of a writer and I lack seriously in the creative department. Can anyone read my pets short story and tell me what you think of it, please? It is loosely based off of a book I read as a child called Martin's Mice. Here is his link http://www.subeta.net/petinfo.php?petid=749116

@jammin

xD It's cuteee, asfsa. ;u; The writing style itself is a little too much of 'telling' rather then showing, but this works adorably for a pet story. Nice job. : D

Thank you so much!!