Okay, I'm about to make this HA but before doing so, I want to know if it's too much or if I need to add a little something in there as well

Any and all suggestions are much appreciated ^_^ PINGme!

I'm far from an expert, but if I have any suggestions it would be to add a little more harsh black in and around the chest area. You have it on the knees and on teh face.. but none running throughout the mid-section. Other than that like it.

Ooo! I knew something was missing, and that was just it! thank you so much ^_^