So I just finished the story for my pet Zowi. Link: http://subeta.net/petinfo.php?petid=3138748

I know I'm not the best writer and also english isn't my first language so there might be some dumb mistakes I'm sorry for that. But besides of that I wanted to know what you guys think of it and also what I should change and so on c:

That was a really sweet story! Only mistakes I saw were in the third paragraph - "I'd be a straw kitten for forever" Do you mean Stray kitten? & right near the end, an odd capital letter - "I'm a normal white kitten, I can'T"

I'm not a writer by any means but maybe a revision of less full stops & more commas to keep the story flowing a bit more~ Good luck!

Thank you c: Oh yes I ment stray kitten I just wrote too fast so I didn't saw that x_x Yeah I know what you mean , I'm trying to get more commas in it then c:

Thank you (: