I am still relatively new to subeta and very rusty on my writing/css skills.

I just finished Archaedius and Baris' profiles/ beginning stories and would love some suggestions/ peer editing. Their stories will eventually intertwine. Perhaps you'll catch the link when you read them c;

Anything really helps. & you won't hurt my feelings if you say something negative.. I just want to improve haha.

Thanks a bunch in advance c: