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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I personally loved the revamp! However, if I may suggest, the tail tuff could be less chubby, it looks odd >w< And the head's angle is slighty off, butI loved everything else heart


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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I don't like the head on the proposed revamp. I think this is because I find it to not be sharp enough (in terms of angles of the head, not the literal pixel quality). It's kinda cartoonish. And the way the muzzle comes down is a bit flat. I'd like to see the head be a bit sleeker.

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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Creepypasta

The original Montre has obviously outdated art, but a generally cool, nonchalant kind of demeanor. The new art is great, but something seems unnatural about the pose. It makes me think of a taxidermy animal. Instead of that cool and slouchy manner, the new expression and body language make it seem suspicion and apprehensive.

The wings and hindquarters (including tail) look splendid, though.

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
Lisa
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While I like it better overall (especially the wings and the fact it's not leaning oddly forward) it's kind of awkward looking somehow. The no mouth thing bothers me a lot actually...plenty of colors of the montre have mouths. It kind of freaks me out that this one doesn't and honestly I think adding at least a small line of one might fix it right up. The shape of the face is kind of odd as well...I think it's that the jaw line is so straight. And it would be really great if you could make the feathers on its tail bigger/brighter. They were always my favorite part for whatever reason lol. Overally though, it's a lot better than the older one. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with it after the suggestions are taken into account.

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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I love the details, but the face feels flat to me and the snout way too straight. It makes it look off. The pose is a bit stiff and can be a bit more relaxed. Outside of a few off details in the face and stiffness of the pose, it's great.

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I love the original Montre and don't think it needs fixing! I do like the wings on the new one but that is it! Thanks ❤

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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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Ugh, I sketched this for fun and there's so many anatomy errors, lol. I had to look at the montre again, and noticed the back legs look a bit off-balanced in the revamped version. I feel like the revamped version seems too stiff as well compared to the older version, so maybe have it lean forward a little bit?

Other than this and the nose bridge, I really look forward to a revamped montre. o3o!!!

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
Margan
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I like the new version as it makes it look much more regal while keeping the fox like qualities that are well loved

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I do not like the revamp. The face points straight down which no canine's skull does, there has to be a slight indent (stop) at the beginning of the snout.

The body is way to stiff now and pillowish to me. Where the tail connects and the hip area by it are off.....I will redline if it will help when I have the time.

That face is the biggest offender though if that was fixed the rest would be ok. It's face isn't fox/coyote, like it should be, instead it's bull terrier, which even they have a stop at the snout.

I'm in a rush so sorry if this sounded rude just trying to get my thoughts down.

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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I love the shading and overall stance of the new one, but I feel like the face is lacking? If the face were more defined instead of being so round it'd look a bit better to me.

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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I don't really like the new face/head shape. The old one looked more fox-like. So I voted for the old one, because it changes the whole feel of the pet. But other than that, it's very nice. :)

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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Nameless

Kind of late to the party but Tried it with something closer to the original head. Also messed with the legs a bit. Would have liked to do full color but this computer is Bad for drawing. And i'll let somebody else mess with the wings, lord knows i'll just break those

Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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What I like about the new design... the shading. the details in the wings. that tail!

What I would love to see improved in the new design... the nose being either more pronounced (jutting out a bit) OR the nose just being less long. OR the eyes being shifted down a little, if the nose was to remain the same.

I would also like to see the wings a little smaller.

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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago
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I love the new montre... it's absolutely gorgeous o:

I would have preferred if the muzzle was a little more sculpted/contoured, but other than that, I think the artist did a fantastic job.


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Oct 21, 2015 10 years ago Official
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Rah

Ok guys - I think we have enough to go on here! I'm noticing that pretty much the same comments are being repeated at this point so I'm going to go ahead and lock the thread so the artist can get on with fixes :) Thank you very much for your feedback, and we hope to bring you the new montre soon :)


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