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Jun 24, 2016 9 years ago
Colour
made a huge mistake
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9/10 - I love the colour combination, it works so well together, the only thing I think I would change is the face, it's a little off to me and doesn't really work into the outift.

Also maybe a different hair colour? The length works but the colour is a little dark for the rest of the outfit.

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Jun 28, 2016 9 years ago
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Carmine

8/10 Its really cute! It looks like some of the older avatars on here but I like the way you did it, not many people do the simple stuff anymore. Only thing im not a fan of is the hair and headband

Jul 4, 2016 9 years ago
Star Captain
Galaxia
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SailorButtress

9.75/10, the only thing throwing it off even a little is the icicle necklace, and that is a tiny thing. Other than that I really like how it's layered and coordinated.

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Jul 5, 2016 9 years ago
Maximoff
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Ratu

Looks pretty scary for me and the eyes don't match the color scheme that happens here in my opinion. You can use shades of pastel green of the hair around the feet area too (but not necessarily). The biggest distraction is only the pair of eyes because it's a big no for me, sorry. 8/10

Jul 5, 2016 9 years ago
Kura
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Maniacal

8.5/10 Very pretty and interesting! I like the style you have going on here, and especially the makeup! I'm not a big fan of this hair though, I feel like it's not quite full enough and looks like the hairline is receding a bit? I'd pick maybe one of the hair pieces from Five Seven Five, like

Overall, great look though!

Jul 20, 2016 9 years ago
OCEANE
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CatHolic

FRICK i liked your HA in another thread the other day and here I am again. I have those leggings WLed so u know it's real. Hair and shirt coordinate nicely and the face and legs are interesting. This is a really nice take on a casual/simple HA. Maybe add a ring or some kind of hair accessory, if anything. Lighter-colored shoes if you're feeling matchy-matchy. I style stalk you/10.

@ next person: help I have no idea what I'm doing with the head/neck/arm area this is not my Style

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Jul 25, 2016 9 years ago
Maximoff
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Ratu

I'm not sure but this reminds me of Lady Gaga a lot. I like that you cooperate the pastel rainbow colors but it isn't actually enough in my opinion. There should be more items of the same shades that can be cooperate well in here. Also, the shades are too bold for this HA concept/color scheme. I don't like that the most. I'd suggest that you put a background or something in the back rather than leaving it empty. 4.8/10

Jul 29, 2016 9 years ago
Carmine_Copia
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Behemoth Archangelo

OK gonna do this to myself again. : ) So above me is a pretty amazing thing. I loveeee the lighting. The layering is really good and the colors are great. I love how there is a lot of red and brown in the person but the bordering is blues and golds. It comes together really well. 9.5. Awesome avatar.

Ok. Go ahead and rate me. It's kinda older in style.... Why is my avatar not showing up correctly!!!???

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Sep 4, 2016 9 years ago
This rift empty
Babs
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Tilly

I appreciate your use of old school items haha. But it personally just doesn't work for me-- but of course, to each their own. The face is pretty plain which is a negative to me. And there's so many layers going on, and it all doesn't really come together. It kinda looks like you just threw a bunch of items on and hoped for the best (which is what I do most of the time so I can't really say much). But you are working with a lot of older items and the HA overall doesn't look tooooo bad, so that's a feat in itself. Yet it lacks an overall theme, and there's no color scheme.

5/10

Sep 4, 2016 9 years ago
Maximoff
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Ratu

Nice gore-y theme. I like that you cooperate the color of black/dark grey (sort of) and white with some essence of blood but I personally think that the hair doesn't go well with the concept/theme.

6.6/10

Sep 5, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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7/10 The buck skull just doesn't look right to me, it looks like it's floating in front of your head rather than sitting on it. I think a less busy belt would look nicer. It just doesn't match the other subtle, cream items.

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Sep 8, 2016 9 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

9/10 Looks pretty good not a big fan of orange myself. I would suggest maybe a green background? I am going to guess most expensive item as the mask?

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Sep 20, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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7/10 I don't think the shoe layering works particularly well. The front pair of shoes doesn't really look like they're on your feet. I think the makeup contrasts too much with the rest of your HA rather than flowing with it.

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Sep 20, 2016 9 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

I love how perfectly balanced the gold and blues are in your HA 10/10

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Oct 16, 2016 9 years ago
OCEANE
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CatHolic

on one hand, I like how you're using some of the spider items, but on the other, the trim on the shoes doesn't match. That's minor, but there are a million black boots onside that could work better! There should be lace black boots too to go with your theme. Also it's interesting how we're using the same hair but in different ways. Anyway. It's just a little plain? There's no accessories aside from the crown and the wand, and while I'm liking the creepy pumpkin theme, you could do a lot more to add a little life (or death!) to your HA. 6/10

@ next person hit me with your best shot plz this is a revamp of an old HA and I have no idea what to do (but I'd like to keep the hair, horns, and boots)

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Oct 22, 2016 9 years ago
Maximoff
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Ratu

I'm not sure what the theme should be. I like some of the color matching but not sure why there's silver/grey there as for the horns and the necklace. It's pretty simple too. The only thing I like is the skin and in my opinion there's a lot of things to do with that beautiful skin. I'd die for that skin XD Color shceme is poorly cooperated in here and the background is so, off, just why?

3.3/10

Oct 23, 2016 9 years ago
Oh My Shinwa, we thought
Gypsy
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Moksha

10/10 beautiful color scheme, everything fits really well together. :)

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Oct 29, 2016 9 years ago
Pengy
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Barry B. Benson

9/10 I love the use of the skin :D! I would suggest maybe a darker dress but I also like the way the dress stands out :D! The deer is so cute :D!

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Nov 3, 2016 9 years ago
mode
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9/10 Love the use of dark colors with the bg! Also the brighter blue accents really pull the avatar together. Great work. :)

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Nov 3, 2016 9 years ago
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9/10 Love the use of dark colors with the bg! Also the brighter blue accents really pull the avatar together. Great work. :)

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