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Jan 15, 2016 10 years ago
JayJays
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6.5/10 The hat doesn't quite fit with the hair, it has that odd overlap on the top left perhaps try a different hairstyle. The bubblegum should also layer over the hair. I think you need some eyebrows :P

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Jan 16, 2016 10 years ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

9/10 ooh, really cool fiery dragon look! i love the colors and the theme. maybe you could add some jewelry like a necklace and/or bracelet to give it more oomph, and i think you could make the tights a little more vibrant.

Jan 19, 2016 10 years ago
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Spamton

I love the colors, i love love love the colors! 9/10! My only suggestion is to change...something about the waist! The yellow shape just looks a little awkward!

Jan 20, 2016 10 years ago
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Carmine

9/10 cant really find anything to suggest. maybe a pet or companion, or maybe more necklaces, but i really like this avatar.

Jan 20, 2016 10 years ago
JayJays
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7.5/10 I think the yellow boiw should go under the hair as it looks like it has fused with the hair which is a little odd. It looks like you might be wearing multiple pairs of earrings perhaps just wear one as it looks a bit cluttered.

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Jan 29, 2016 10 years ago
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9/10 lovely colors and textures, and very interesting use of that claw thing - i've been meaning to use it one of these days. perhaps you could bring more of its warm pinkish/purplish brown into the hair and/or tights, though?

Feb 1, 2016 10 years ago
JayJays
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9/10 This is really quirky and cool. The shorts and headband look great and you manage to make that hair somehow not normal. I know the ankle flower is for a touch of blue but they're always looked a bit odd to me. Maybe go for periwinkle blue shoes instead?

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Feb 16, 2016 10 years ago
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9/10, I can't really find much to say except the bracelet looks like an extension of the shirt (but what can ya do) and the lineart for the wig looks a bit out of place since it's so dark. Otherwise, good use of items to get a breezy effect, most HAs going for that don't do it as well as you have.

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Feb 23, 2016 10 years ago
Screech93
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8/10 I think you could have done more with it with a backdrop or some fore ground or ground options. The outfit itself is adorable and well put together.

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Feb 26, 2016 10 years ago
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Carmine

9/10 plant is plant very nice maybe a background though love the bleeding tooth fungus and skull on the floor

Feb 26, 2016 10 years ago
Memnoch
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10 of 10,is cute as a button,as usual

Feb 26, 2016 10 years ago
JayJays
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7/10 It's cute, the eyebrows should layer under the hair though. Also, the clothing doesn't really fit to the background to me. It looks warm and sunny but they're more dark winter clothes.

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Feb 26, 2016 10 years ago
Memnoch
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That's probably more than I deserve : ) I don't spend any time on such things,so thank you,now as far as you...10 of 10,is perfect..clicks your little heart thing there : )

Mar 14, 2016 10 years ago
JayJays
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7.5/10

Quite cute, if a little plain. I'd go with a different hairstyle, this one just seems outdated to me.

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Mar 14, 2016 10 years ago
Memnoch
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:D I went up .5 points and I never was a trend setter,so : / Gives you 8 of 10,love the face,is very cute and endearing,even if it's a little sad : ( and I believe that outfit could only be worn on Subeta : P Well perhaps at a parade..

Mar 15, 2016 10 years ago
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I'd say 8/10, I like it overall, but I think it would be even better with a different hairstyle.

Mar 22, 2016 9 years ago
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7.5/10 Its an interesting theme, and a spooky/haunted background would definitely add to it. But with a blank background, the pale complexion gets washed out and it detracts from the whole outfit.

Mar 23, 2016 9 years ago
Martel
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6/10

The overall theme is nice and I like the understated natural look of the scene but as far as colors go the wolf at the bottom is just this huge gray shape, and the dark blue accent in the necklace isn't present anywhere else in the avatar making it both eye catching but also kind of dissonant with all the oranges and reds. Maybe a lighter blue necklace would work better since then it plays off the water in the background.

Mar 23, 2016 9 years ago
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Nereida

8/10 I really like where you are going with this, I especially love how the mask and the kimono go together. I'd suggest maybe removing the yellow tones though, and keeping it in white, blue, red and maybe some light purple.

Mar 23, 2016 9 years ago
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hahhh pretty sure I just adored yours on sf. 9/10, I love it, it just seems a little busy but I'm not sure if there's anything to be done about that. Not sure about the feather train but it does add depth. Love the legs and the bone tatoos I'm assuming? Good use of the gray and gold.

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