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Dec 25, 2016 9 years ago
xAvarice
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Morgana Uciliece

10/10

First off, that milkshake right there looks delicious secondly, I love your HA - I wouldnt change a thing <:

Dec 27, 2016 9 years ago
penguin56
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Hikea

9/10 i love your look ^_^ only thing is i would like to see more of the background

Dec 28, 2016 9 years ago
Amichai
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Gonna say 6/10. There's a ton of items from the same set there, and the background beyond the tree and fence look distinctively blank. But I really like the face! Those eyes are some of my faves and the lips go sooo well with the candy cane stuff. Plus the shirt has some nice continuity with the snowmen. Things I might change: adding more of a background, swapping out one of the candy cane items (probably the sweater) for another, also giving the person some things that match the colors on the snowmen— teal, purple, etc.

Dec 28, 2016 9 years ago
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sorry if this isn't really a critique at all, but i love it~ 10/10 i love how it kind of tells a story with the ominous little girl vibe contrasting with the pastel background. only thing maybe is that the face/mid-section is a bit black heavy but i don't think it's absolutely necessary to add more teal/turquoise (personal preference). maybe some kind of teal eyes would look cool? c:

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Dec 29, 2016 9 years ago
RubyLove
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I love your avatar, I would give it a 9/10 though. I feel like the shoes don't match the theme/color palate. (Have no idea how to word that, sorry) But over all I love it!

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Jan 2, 2017 9 years ago
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CatHolic

Well, the hair and the wings don't work together - try one of the smaller sets of wings like or . could also be interesting. Hair can be really tricky to work with! The shoes/accessories are also very simple, but the ring is a nice touch. Aside from the horns/tail, none of the items really go together, but the colors do match! Also, look into the non-default eye items as well, though I like that you're using blush to add detail to the face. 5/10

edit: for whoever's critiquing me, i'm struggling with the hair and legs a bit if you have any ideas! I also have a different, less saturated version of this here

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Jan 3, 2017 9 years ago
Amichai
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9/10? I definitely prefer this version, the colors work much better together. Not sure what you're struggling with on the legs; the gold really works with the gold on the other things. It might be nice to see a more defined shoe item, although I'm not sure what that would be. Something with a heel or sole. The hair goes pretty well, too, although I also really like to see straight black hair with that helmet for some reason.

Jan 6, 2017 9 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

Looks good, the shoes look good but don't quite match the rest. Also maybe add some purple near the top of the HA? 7/10

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Jan 6, 2017 9 years ago
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isabellaita

Uhm...from your avatar it seems to me like you like doctor who, I'm not too big a fan of the show..I haven't seen any episodes to know what it's all about. (sorry if my response seems biased towards the show) I'm not sure if the fiery background looks the best with your avatar. It's different but I would add more a subtle background with your police box, does it come together? (the fiery background and police box?) Other wise I like your blue outfit. :)

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Jan 7, 2017 9 years ago
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Esoleese

9.5/10 I love the spoopy skeletons dancing in the back! the only thing I would change would be the shoes. maybe a heel or something would be better

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Jan 8, 2017 9 years ago
Radish
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9/10 I really think the only thing missing is a hint of gold on the head, for the sake of balance. The strands on the antlers don't pop out enough to count.

These immediately come to mind:

Also, consider using a body blush/ face blush to add a bit more depth to the base! Although I'm not sure what works with your skin tone, if anything...

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Jan 10, 2017 9 years ago
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isabellaita

I love your avatar!! I don't think I would change anything about it. What's the background you are using for you avatar??

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Jan 16, 2017 9 years ago
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8/10

I like the color scheme - I'm a ho for blue - but the shoes are out of place. I'd swap them, or try to incorporate more of the purple and the aqua blue in to the rest of the HA

Jan 17, 2017 9 years ago
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Darkmontre

I love the red, gray and white. The hair is a cream that looks good but also looks slightly different than the rest. Also seems to be a lot of gray toward the back and not so much on the front. 8/10

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Jan 18, 2017 9 years ago
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7/10. I really like the color scheme! The only suggestion I have is maybe add something/more to the face area.

Jan 19, 2017 9 years ago
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Maniacal

9/10 Yooo love the layering of the clothes going on here! My only critique really is the hair (which is weird because I love that hair??), I don't think it quite ties in with the rest of the look. I'd also like to see more of the bright colors of the horn tied in with the rest of the clothes more, like how you have the hint of orange at the socks. Overall very cool HA :D

Jan 20, 2017 9 years ago
JayJays
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7/10 I think the makeup is a bit much, perhaps eyes without the dots would work better and more subtle lips. Maybe either try darker hair or use some of those sea greens and aqua blues elsewhere on your HA?

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Jan 21, 2017 9 years ago
Idyllic
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9/10 Love the color blending on this one, very pretty together. My one comment would be on the eyes...something "softer" might fit better... or for more pink colored

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Jan 23, 2017 9 years ago
Rathoren
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Steve Irwin

I really like yours, its not normally my style but you put it together nicely and the colors or gorgeous! :) 9/10

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Jan 28, 2017 9 years ago
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Kitagawa Yusuke

I like it! Very fantasy adventure-y. Not sure about that particular shawl (cape?) because the color doesn't tie to anything else, but I like the feel it gives! 8/10

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