I think the biggest issue with these is that a lot of the darker colors have too dark lines in them, the lines need to be a bit softer and more like a darker shade of the color and not black. The only black lines that are needed are for the outside/border lines and those need to be the same thickness, and it looks like you have it a bit darker in some parts than others (and shaky). The best example is the white: at the top right the outline is way too thin and uneven, but at the bottom where the curls are it is way too thick. Other colors show this, but the white one was the better one to use as an example to show you how the lines are. I definitely think the style is really cute but it definitely needs a bit more work. Also the whispies don't quite count for the lineart/border lines so those can remain thinner while the lineart/border needs to be thick but not too thick and the same thickness throughout the CW. The CI looks great though. Also, the lineart/border needs to be even on where it touches the HA too, to them that counts as border so it really needs to be distinctive and it's very shakey on the body. If anything I think the lineart/outside border on this is probably too thick on the outside and that's why it looks like that so if you kept it thin but different than the other lines in it, then it might be better.

Other than that definitely an improvement on the shading.

It is really nice though, just needs some fixing because they're very strict about the lineart/border and that's one of the first things that they look at for denial. Also props to you for the curls, I've asked a few artists to draw curly hair for me that was that curly and a lot of them don't have practice doing curls like I wanted. And your hair has loads of gorgeous curls!

Thank you so much for your input! Lines in this program are SO DIFFICULT.

I updated this post (http://subeta.net/forums.php/gotopost/56453446) so it has previews of what the wigs will look like on the avatar base, and also tried to fix the lines!

WoW! they are gorgeous!I love the long curly look that is slightly touseled. When I have csc, I would love to pick up at least a couple colors of these :)

Sidenote; Interest check on this afro I did?

[IMG]http://i1156.photobucket.com/albums/p562/airighpooka/afro%20sample_zpsoqlk2z63.png[/IMG]

I would love to see the afro on the site. There are definitely very few, almost none like it.

Yeah I noticed! I drew that because I was frustrated that I couldn't find hair for a Garnet HA cosplay haha. The only question is what would count as a subeta-style afro. There's the discontinued clown wigs, yeah, but there's actually a big difference between a proper afro and some polyester fake hair that's really curly and that would translate differently into this style I think. I wasn't entirely sure how to go about the shading but I tried.